person random

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Heard the only way to get better at writing was to write. So here we are... Anyway, if anyone revises any of my stuff I'll return the favor

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"everyone has a plan until they get punched in the face"- Mike Tyson

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Sky-Kissed Girl And Other Names You Can Give Yourself

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Noise in my Head

PROMPT: Open Prompt

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Tides

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Weirdos hogging a public bench

PROMPT: Tiny Love Story

    She had thick curly brown hair and clusters of little red zits along her eyebrows. His head was shaved and his arms were covered in doodles done in sharpie. I knew the exact brand because she was still adding to his sleeve of tattoos, as she gnawed on her lip in frustration he burst out laughing at a joke that no one had told.
    "Do you mind? I'm working here!" Her voice matched her face perfectly, low mixed...

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A little witch

PROMPT: Child Narrator

     Sometimes the shadows on my wall reveal their faces to me. My mom promises me that they really are just shadows, but I know she's wrong. The blades of the leaves on the trees outside form his nose and the curves of the streetlights create his chin. I like to talk to him, he listens well. I tell him about school and my brothers, he understands.
    Sometimes the shadows on my wall reveal the face of my friend,...

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I can't find North in this weather

PROMPT: Star Wish

I've got a lot to wish for, I know that for certain. Selfish fantasies, profound dreams, hopes, and hatreds. If only I could just find a star. There's not much anyone could see in this weather, as the snow chokes the air and swallows the earth. When I look up all I see is gray.
    I clench my eyes shut and imagine all of the places that could have stars right now. Maybe in the desert or the ocean....

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Oh my Ophelia

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Oh my Ophelia
I can see the moon in your eyes again
It's been quite a while since I've seen it
My dreams are filled with your eyes 
But I can never find that moon

Oh my Ophelia
Let me dry the water from your hair
And set that pretty dress out in the sun
Let me put the rose back in your lips
And take the water from your lungs

Oh my Ophelia 
These moments never last for long ...

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A town on the Alaskan Coast

PROMPT: A Fictional Landscape

     Be sure to shut your windows at night, some even like to seal them with duct tape. When it's dark be sure to stay inside and pour salt around the doors. You'll still hear the ocean, begging you to come to her, begging you to stay. Don't listen, nobody wants to be one of the bodies that wash ashore at daybreak. Sometimes your neighbors will go missing for weeks at a time, only to return as if nothing strange has...

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