Embo

Australia

I love to write draw and read. I do lots of sport, such as swimming, sailing and hockey. I have overcome many challenges in my life and I enjoy expressing my thoughts and fantasies through the arts. I like to think of myself as unique.

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Hi! My goal is to receive purely constructive feedback so that I can improve my writing.

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Embo (Australia)() published:

Relax

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 The refreshing Mediterranean breeze blew through the olive trees high on the hill, making their leaves rustle pleasantly. It continued over the electric-blue tops of the domed white buildings and blew across the sea to the islands beyond. The whitewashed walls looked bright, even through my sunglasses and the blue tops where almost invisible against the cornflower-blue sky. The sun was warm on my skin, shining consistently down. The scents of honey, grilled meat and sundried tomatoes filled the air...

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Embo (Australia)() published:

From the Eyes of a Snow Leopard. #Winterwriting

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Tiny flakes of snow land on the tips of each hair on my body. A thicker coating of powder coats my feet, I can feel it slowly seeping into my pelt. I do not feel nor fear the cold; it is my friend and without it I would die. Cold is the feeling of death and I am the face of it, especially for some of the men who climb this stately mountain. A snowflake lands on the tip of...

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Embo (Australia)() published:

Plain Ground

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Plain Ground
I pat Jochi’s mane as we continue to plough through the spruce forest. Finches call over my head and a twig snaps. I freeze. Any company of traitors could be lurking in the forest, watching, waiting. I smell the wild, tangy scent of Jochi’s sweat and crouch lower over his neck. The trees are so tightly packed that my only chance of escape would be to abandon Jochi and run. A corsac fox darts out from behind a...
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A Fallen King

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This is a great piece of writing, well done!

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Embo (Australia)() published:

The Goddess of Healing

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The Goddess of Healing                                                 
Panacea, the Greek Goddess of Healing, lurked behind a tree, sticking out her head prudently every once in a while to see if the funeral was over. The light drizzle stuck to the fine hairs of her cashmere jumper and made her new jeans damp and sticky. Her wavy white-blonde hair hung...
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