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she_writes

United States

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I am trying to make a difference in the way I know best: my writing.

Message from Writer

Good day, future legend!
Today's struggle, tomorrow's strife-
all essential components of your origin story.
You, forged for greatness. Go!
- Lin Manuel Miranda

Peer Reviews

Rain

FREE WRITING

Maybe this is just me, but you might consider changing your phrasing a bit. Some of the phrases seemed choppy, but then again if that is a creative element don't listen to me! In fact, the choppy sound of your phrases almost replicates how rain falls. Maybe you could change the phrasing a bit to specifically replicate this? Nice going! This is a great poem.

about 1 month ago

Needling Memories

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One heck of a piece!!

about 1 month ago

Not a writer

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The only thing I would work on is some grammatical/spacing/spelling errors, unless that is an artistic choice to drive home the "I'm not a writer" idea of the piece.

about 2 months ago

The magic of bread

PROMPT: Food Writing Competition 2019

2 months ago