she_writes

United States

Teen
I like the Starbucks Veranda blend
Language lover, Spanish and German
Student news reporter
Believer
Gryffindor
Read that book now, we only have so much time

Message from Writer

Good day, future legend!
Today's struggle, tomorrow's strife-
all essential components of your origin story.
You, forged for greatness. Go!
- Lin Manuel Miranda

Peer Reviews

To Kill a Mockingbird Final Essay (Please give feedback it's for school)

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Great work! School essays are stressful, but you tackled this one well!

4 months

Rain

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Maybe this is just me, but you might consider changing your phrasing a bit. Some of the phrases seemed choppy, but then again if that is a creative element don't listen to me! In fact, the choppy sound of your phrases almost replicates how rain falls. Maybe you could change the phrasing a bit to specifically replicate this? Nice going! This is a great poem.

about 1 year

Needling Memories

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One heck of a piece!!

about 1 year

Not a writer

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The only thing I would work on is some grammatical/spacing/spelling errors, unless that is an artistic choice to drive home the "I'm not a writer" idea of the piece.

about 1 year

The magic of bread

PROMPT: Food Writing Competition 2019

about 1 year