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mvisvi

United States

madison knisley ♡ a girl with a heart filled with poetry and prose that's wilting with the flowers

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mvisvi (United States) published:

too tired to function | 9:46pm

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holding this instrument in my hands
but my fingers aren’t moving
they’re not working
i’m trying to play
but i can’t
every time i breathe in,
a cloud of sadness gets pulled in
and my lungs ache
tears are falling
i can’t see the notes
my vision is blurry
why can’t i move?
 

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mvisvi (United States) published:

untitled (trigger warning) | 9:32pm

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that agonizing pain in your chest
teardrops forming puddles on the bathroom floor
biting down on your hand or a towel or anything
to keep from making a sound
 
your body trembling and shaking
and you’re surprised you just haven’t given up yet
the scars in your heart already pulling you in
and urging you to just rip open your skin
but there’s that promise you made
the promise you can’t break,
no questions asked
you cry until no...

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lost | 9:29pm

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i feel disconnected from my own body
                           i look down
and i know this is my anatomy
                           it’s mine
                           so why do i feel like it’s not?
it feels like someone put my thoughts in a different body
                                                              
                                                                     and i’m lost
                                                                     i don’t know where i am
                                                                     where am i?
                                                                     please find me

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mvisvi (United States) published:

bitter | 9:26pm

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i’m sorry but i’m empty
please no one touch me
i swear i was doing fine, honestly
but now my hands keep shaking
my lungs keep aching
my skin keeps bruising
my wrists are craving
and i can’t control my breathing

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mvisvi (United States) published:

tranquil | 9:31pm

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i want to lay with you
to hold or be held,
isn’t the question
let’s sink until we meld

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mvisvi (United States) published:

forgiveness | 3:09am

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there are hands coming from my throat
standing on the edge of the sun
trying to reach for your voice
because all we have ever wanted
was a soul that sings like our own

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mvisvi (United States) published:

the difference between you and me | 3:00pm

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i’d rather receive an honest no
than a hopeless maybe
that’s the difference between you and me
you take the forbidden fruit
i take a bite from the poisonous tree

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mvisvi (United States) published:

black & blue | 3:56pm

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no masterpiece is a masterpiece
without black and blue
no masterpiece can succeed
without hidden value

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mvisvi (United States) published:

staircase | 11:52pm

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you want me to take the first step, yet,
you haven’t even led me to the staircase

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