Ellenrbnsn (United States) published:
PROMPT: Twenty-Six Sentences
Antique furniture fills the small, dusty rooms. Boxes lay piled in every corner. Clothing is scattered among the chairs. Dawson enters, carrying more boxes.
"Elizabop, isn't this a great find?"
"Fruit Cake," she pauses, rolling her eyes. "Go carry in more boxes, and stop acting like we found this house at the thrift shop."
"Honey, you know I hate it when you call me fruit cake, but I'll go."
"I think you're lucky I said yes, and you should love...
over 4 years ago
Ellenrbnsn (United States) published:
PROMPT: Pantoum
I stand by the ocean, and I shout, but no one listens.
The echoes of my own voice are the only reply.
I turn from the water just to create some distance,
and let the crashing of the waves be my goodbye.
The echoes of my own voice are the only reply.
I've grown tired of waiting for anything new,
and I let the crashing of the waves be my goodbye.
It was peaceful until I realized why the ocean...
over 4 years ago
Ellenrbnsn (United States) reviewed:
PROMPT: Illumination
You really pack a lot into such a short piece! You use beautiful language and great comparisons that really create a vivid character. However, the title seems a bit unfitting. How could you modify or expand the character or the...
almost 5 years ago
Ellenrbnsn (United States) reviewed:
PROMPT: Open Prompt
First of all, this poem is excellently writing, so I commend you on that. It flows beautifully and conveys such a powerful meaning. However, that meaning is a little hard to grasp at first. Like I mentioned, I had to...
almost 5 years ago
Ellenrbnsn (United States) reviewed:
PROMPT: Paint Swatch
First off, your piece is beautifully worded, and the comparisons really stick in my mind. Also, the message is a really important message that was incorporated very well. However, a color isn't described, so it doesn't really follow the prompt....
almost 5 years ago
Ellenrbnsn (United States) reviewed:
PROMPT: Imagine This
Your piece is absolutely beautiful. It embodies so much love, happiness and free spirit. It was a pleasure to read. Keep writing!
almost 5 years ago