Ellenrbnsn
United States of America
"Writing is a passion I have never understood, yet a storyteller is all I've ever wanted to be."
-Ruth Parks
Message from Writer
My name is Ellen, and I’m just a high school junior, trying to survive “the best years of my life.” I take on too much for my own good, but I’m dedicated to managing all of it, especially in my clubs. In my “free time,” I like to wander infrequently traveled paths (like good ol’ Robert Frost), and, of course, write. I also enjoy the occasional novel and strumming the strings of my guitar. In the future, I plan to attend a local college for degrees in Secondary Education with a specialization in English and Creative Writing. I hope to teach high school English and write novels (yes, at the same time) upon graduation from college.
Ellenrbnsn (United States of America)() published:
Moving Day
PROMPT: Twenty-Six Sentences
Antique furniture fills the small, dusty rooms. Boxes lay piled in every corner. Clothing is scattered among the chairs. Dawson enters, carrying more boxes.
"Elizabop, isn't this a great find?"
"Fruit Cake," she pauses, rolling her eyes. "Go carry in more boxes, and stop acting like we found this house at the thrift shop."
"Honey, you know I hate it when you call me fruit cake, but I'll go."
"I think you're lucky I said yes, and you should love...
over 3 years ago
Ellenrbnsn (United States of America)() published:
Echoes
PROMPT: Pantoum
I stand by the ocean, and I shout, but no one listens.
The echoes of my own voice are the only reply.
I turn from the water just to create some distance,
and let the crashing of the waves be my goodbye.
The echoes of my own voice are the only reply.
I've grown tired of waiting for anything new,
and I let the crashing of the waves be my goodbye.
It was peaceful until I realized why the ocean...
over 3 years ago
Ellenrbnsn (United States of America)() reviewed:
Scars
PROMPT: Illumination
You really pack a lot into such a short piece! You use beautiful language and great comparisons that really create a vivid character. However, the title seems a bit unfitting. How could you modify or expand the character or the...
almost 4 years ago
Ellenrbnsn (United States of America)() reviewed:
The Prisoner
PROMPT: Open Prompt
First of all, this poem is excellently writing, so I commend you on that. It flows beautifully and conveys such a powerful meaning. However, that meaning is a little hard to grasp at first. Like I mentioned, I had to...
almost 4 years ago
Ellenrbnsn (United States of America)() reviewed:
The Color of Words
PROMPT: Paint Swatch
First off, your piece is beautifully worded, and the comparisons really stick in my mind. Also, the message is a really important message that was incorporated very well. However, a color isn't described, so it doesn't really follow the prompt....
almost 4 years ago
Ellenrbnsn (United States of America)() reviewed:
Honeymoon
PROMPT: Imagine This
Your piece is absolutely beautiful. It embodies so much love, happiness and free spirit. It was a pleasure to read. Keep writing!
almost 4 years ago