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Ballad of Mud and Sea

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I’m all fresh broken lakeside water inside the thinness of a
Hot and sunburned skin
Brittle, fluid mud-baths
Woods and Frisbee, Friska, headache, brown
The banks purr and cling
A twig snaps, silence rings
at Midday.
Till you find that there’s
A trickle always going to the black and
Cobalt horizon down at
Murray
Where the salt will join the sky.
You skip that path with hardened soles
And heels cracked with sunny winds
- Crawl; games in the bushland...

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So I said in the first answer that simplicity was one of the most beautiful things of this piece, and I like the way that it's the fundamental tenet of the language used throughout. However, oversimplifying and certain instances of...

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