All in all, the piece is great. Simple, but it captures so many emotions, its just beautiful. Great job!! I would love to see a second part of this maybe where Tashi helps Isabelle to go back to how she was. But nevertheless, very nicely written!
Overall, I really like this poem. Even without writing a lot, I can feel your pain and understand your problems. Its very concise and precise, while conveys a much larger meaning. I love the different perspective, where everyone is writing about cheerfulness and happiness, you chose t write a practical issue, also bringing light to the negative effects of April.
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