heykiing (Canada) reviewed:
PROMPT: Improbable Flavor
this was so delectably clever! You have such strong prose and it really shone through brilliantly with the whole piece. Honestly i was trying to find ways to give you descriptive feedback but this was so excellent! Your lovely parallels...
over 1 year ago
heykiing (Canada) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
Interesting! I'd suggest reading it out loud to help spot issues with verb tense changes. Try to stick to one tense for the whole narrative, otherwise it is very confusing and hard to understand for the reader. Also watch for...
over 1 year ago
heykiing (Canada) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
I very much enjoyed reading this, and I am looking forward to reading more!! This is already so well edited and written that I felt almost like I was nitpicking with my comments. The narrative has a great flow and...
over 1 year ago
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heykiing (Canada) published:
FREE WRITING
Inside my room is a universe,
manmade glittering trinkets and a window looking out.
Despondent, my soul often sat, contained and unblinking,
a mind consciously stagnant in the night
as the digital timepiece blinks past 12.
And then: a sudden exhilaration.
The first steps outside,
my reality becomes the screen door clicking shut,
and a rectangle of light at my back.
Light are my bare feet on the grit and gravel,
and soft do my fingertips skim the...
over 1 year ago
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