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The Garden #ollie1stcomp

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ask again

PROMPT: Six Word Story

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the story of a star and me

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Great work! Keep writing!

4 months

#mysecondcontest2 My Lovely Farm

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4 months

drinking unsweetened hurricanes requires a mature palate | #ollies1stcomp

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4 months

They Will Do It

PROMPT: Flashlight

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Saltwater Teacup #Howdy

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Great work! Keep writing!

4 months

Who Looks Up #ollie1stcomp

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4 months

on huckleberry trees & the violence of forgetting

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Sorry if any of my comments came off as any way besides suggestions or compliments, I think this piece is great as is and it's completely up to you on if you edit and how. Great piece! Keep writing!

4 months

bow to the titans of old

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someday, you will kill me

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roses

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Keep writing!! Great work!!

4 months

toxic immunity #126

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Dear young man who sings for an old woman

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Great work! Keep writing! (Sorry for this long over-due review!)

5 months

retrograde / excuses for war

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2020

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you are my backbone

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Great work! Keep writing! (Sorry this review is so late!)

5 months

Wheel of Endless Gold

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2020

Great piece! Keep writing! (Sorry this review is late!)

5 months

And They Danced #aprilaprilapril

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unknown

Never enemies, not(?) friends

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Keep writing!!

6 months

cigarette regrets

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unknown

Body Shame #Pretty Contest 3

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Keep writing! Best luck!

6 months

the water lilies bring us

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Great work! Keep writing!

6 months

A Poet is What I Am #dramatize

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6 months

no mama i am not your daughter i am your child | #aprilaprilapril

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Great work! Keep writing!

6 months

The Flying Dutchman

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Great job! Keep writing!

6 months

Lali

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Great work! Keep writing!

6 months

russian roulette

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This piece was great! Keep writing!

6 months

american poet

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Great piece!! Keep writing!! Best of luck!

6 months

Roots of Animosity

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2020

Great piece! And hope this to be a happy review exchange!

6 months

there once was a girl

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Good job! Keep writing!

6 months

d a w n

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Keep writing!

6 months

Four hundred stabs #30Why Should we change?

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Amazing work! Keep writing!

6 months

Coffee Eyes | Poetic

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Wonderful piece! Keep writing!

6 months

Dropping Roses #126

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Amazing job! Keep up the work!

6 months

scythe unseen

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Great work!

7 months

mistress of evil

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Good piece!

7 months

in and out of the clouds (revised) #Helpme2020 #MagicalRealism

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This piece was amazing! Definitely memorable and experience of its own. You created a new type of fictional culture that I really enjoyed!

7 months

At First Sight | #NewSight |

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This piece was interesting and I would like to see more of it!

8 months

As Eros Loves Psyche #ArtOfCompression

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Liked this piece! Suggestions are merely just that, suggestions!

8 months

Vanilla Box Cake.

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A Hollow Crown

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Haunted Memories

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Great work! Keep writing!!

8 months

The Surgery

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Amazing work! This piece was good! Keep writing!

8 months

Shards of Smoke (#GOrwell contest 2)

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Amazing job! Keep writing!

9 months

I Had Promised Her | #Samina50

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Great work! Keep writing!

10 months

lines and exits

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From the Diary of Jeremy Lancaster | #GOrwell2

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Great work!! Keep writing!!

10 months

The Late 1960s #GOrwell3

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Good work! Keep writing!

10 months

Play your Part #GOrwell2

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Wonderful work! Keep writing!

10 months

If you ask. #GOrwell2

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Wonderful work! Keep writing!

10 months

dehydration / you

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unknown

Before the Battle Music Started There Was This

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Gorgeous work!

10 months

the land

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war

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Wonderful work! Keep writing!

11 months

Birthday

PROMPT: Child Narrator

Keep writing! Great work! You should be proud!

11 months

I am something without teeth

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This piece was amazing, as are your writing skills. Don't stop.

11 months

Draped in Darkness

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2019

11 months

3 Marshmallows #festivities

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"i thought it less like a lake and more like a moat"

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Keep writing!! Wonderful work!!

11 months

Barry The Bee

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Keep writing!

11 months

hometown blues

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I love how the title fits perfectly with the tone and idea of this piece! Keep writing!

11 months

moments of shattering #HomoSapiensStory

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Keep writing!

11 months

And lies will tarnish the blood of the innocent until my veins are ruby-red once more.

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I tried my best not to highlight everything, but it was extremely difficult. Normally I try to highlight my favorite aspects of pieces of writing tools used, and you not only created a well rounded gorgeous piece, but also one filled with lots of writing tools. Plus, the spots where there wasn't much, just has minor grammatical or comprehension errors, I highlighted so you knew what I was referring too.

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dogs' eyelashes

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Wonderful writing! Keep writing!

11 months

Believe

PROMPT: One-Liner

The only thing about this piece is it isn't exactly a one-liner. Typically one-liners are one line, however, many writers go past this rule by making their 1 sentence long and it going to another line. However, this one is two sentences, due to the punctuation.

11 months

on how to say goodbye before your time

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Wonderful piece! Keep writing!

11 months

Divinity

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You should be insanely proud of this piece!!! It was amazing! Keep writing!

11 months

The Power of Words

PROMPT: One-Liner

Wonderful work! A small suggestion though, perhaps just naming this piece 'Power of Words' without the 'the'.

12 months

nuclear fusion

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Lovely work!

12 months

please be silent

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Amazing work! Look forward to reading more from you!

about 1 year

sugar plum nightmares

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Original and gorgeous as always!

about 1 year

Adoni: A Study Of Fire

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iii. lost in space

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Lovely piece! Look forward to reading more from you!

about 1 year

The House at the End of Elm Street

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Lovely piece here! Such an interesting piece of work!

about 1 year

Kansas city bbq chicken

PROMPT: Food Writing Competition 2019

Great piece! Hope you like random reviews!

over 1 year

fissure

PROMPT: Fissure

Wonderful piece! Hope you like random reviews! #GrowingInMay

over 1 year

Interesting Conversation

PROMPT: Raining Cats and... Question Marks?

Great work! Hope you like reviews! #GrowingInMay

over 1 year

Don't Grow Up

PROMPT: Words to the Young

Hope you like random reviews!! #GrowingInMay

over 1 year

Qualities of Fog

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Wonderful piece! Hope you like random reviews! #GrowingInMay

over 1 year

Becoming Summer

PROMPT: Season-a-Changing

Hope you like free reviews!! #GrowingInMay

over 1 year

My Heart Beats Sickly #sweetlybitter

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Hope you like this random review! #GrowingInMay

over 1 year

Every teardrop holds a memory, my darling #GrowingInMay

PROMPT: 0-9

Hope you like this random review!! #GrowinginMay

over 1 year

Nameless

PROMPT: Nameless

Great piece! (This was just a random review I do to help writers and make sure they know their pieces are being read and loved!)

over 1 year

Tea-Coffee

PROMPT: Polar Opposite

This piece was absolutely wonderful and I love it!! Great work! Write freely!

over 1 year

My Life as an Oddity

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Wonderful piece! I love what you've written!

over 1 year

Live

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Great piece! Congrats on the nomination!

over 1 year

p.s. I hate you

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Great work! Absolutely love this!

over 1 year

a response (because your words blew me away)

PROMPT: Love in Words

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IcEbOx

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Great work! Write freely!

over 1 year

music's too sad without you

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gay pirates

PROMPT: Open Prompt

Great work! Keep writing!

over 1 year

Dance of the Flowers #fire

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Great piece! Wonderful and unique!

over 1 year

do you still say my name (or did you forget)

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Wonderful piece!

over 1 year

Ripple of Light

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Great work! Loved this! Congratulations on your nomination by Puppet_Master

over 1 year

Worn Red Skates on Dead Grass #cwccompetition

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This well a good piece and wonderful work!

over 1 year

911, What’s Your Emergency? PENGUINS?

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Great work!

over 1 year

creature

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Write freely! Great work! Congratulations on your nomination by loveletterstosappho

over 1 year

vampyr

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Write freely!! Congratulations on your nomination by RainAndSonder

over 1 year

learned behavior

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Congratulations on your nomination by Paperbird

over 1 year

He wrote love letters in the stars but she forgot her glasses - it happens.

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Great work!!!! Congratulations on your nomination by Anha!!

over 1 year

cigarettes

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Congratulations on your nomination by RainAndSonder

over 1 year

loser

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If you really don't like this piece or not satisfied enough (even thought it's really good), I don't mind helping you, or finding some one to help you write this. Congratulations on your nomination by loveletterstosappho

over 1 year

TINY LOVE STORY: LGBTQ+ VERSION

PROMPT: Tiny Love Story

This is great work!

over 1 year

Addicted

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This was wonderful work Congratulations on your nomination by nevaredhp!!

over 1 year

Stay Awake, or Writing a Poem About Not Sleeping at 3AM, Which Contributes to the Problem I Suppose

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This piece was unique and wonderfully put. Congratulations on your nomination by Paperbird!!!

over 1 year

A Fanciful Silence

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Great work! Congratulations on your nomination by Quille!!

over 1 year

The Dock

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Your story is strong and wonderfully written. Congratulations on your nomination by Quille

over 1 year

carbon monoxide

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This piece is wonderful and impressively written. Great work! Congratulations on your nomination by Anha.

over 1 year

​The Path To Madness #myfirstcontest

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Congratulations on being nominated!! Best of luck! To know who nominated you, go to this link: https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/99399/version/188926)

over 1 year

@WOTW#6 Haiku for the Season

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We love thoroughly looking through people's work, and taking it piece by piece. It allows an understanding when you look at the details first and then the whole piece. Every writer writes something for a reason, and we try to discover yours through these reviews. Lastly, congratulations on being nominated for our January Must Reads by Christy Wisdom.

almost 2 years