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Smile

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Hi! I'm a quirky young teenager who loves to smile and write stories about everything from ants to zoos! I'm super excited to join here as I have come from many different bad writing sites, and I'm glad to find a good one!

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I'm still not a great writer and really need some constructive criticism so I can write a story I've always wanted to!
Any tips or comments are greatly appreciated and will be read. Thanks for your help!
-Smile :D

"All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them." – Walt Disney

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Smile (United States) reviewed:

A Promising Year

PROMPT: 2019

Maybe if you had a few more imperfect things, it would add a lot to it. You already have the insecurity one, but things like anger and sorrow because a little bit of realism is that sometimes imperfect is awesome,...

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Smile (United States) published:

Hero (First Chapter)

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Not all superheros were capes.
Not all fly.
And not all save other's lives.
An example of this is Valerie Reynolds. The girl who put up with a broken family and terrible friendships in a time where it shouldn't have happened. 

Chapter 1
Valerie and Jace walked down the streets of New York, Valerie holding his hand, imagining a terrible image of a possible last time they'd hold hands. She felt as if the thing she needed to tell him...

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Smile (United States) published:

Almost Perfect

PROMPT: 2019

Every new year calls for a new mix, something new and sweet.
2019 could be the perfect year to call for a recipe of Almost Perfection.
To have
A dip of sorrow
A slice of sweet dreams
A spoonful of friendship
A sliver of freedom
A drop of anger
A tub of family time
A bucketful of love
A pinch of hope
A miracle in the making
A splash of excitement
And an ocean sized splash of (almost) perfection.

But...

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Smile (United States) published:

Lighthouse

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Charlie advanced down the path and an exhausting pace, her hair sticking to her sweat-drenched forehead. She knew he was close. Following. Examining. Observing.
Watching.
The suspense was driving her crazy. Charlie knew that he thought she was going to the lighthouse. If she passed through the front door, hid under the stairs and then exited the front door again would he notice her? He was old, yes, but not blind. He'd know. There was no escape from the horror...

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