LyricGirl

United States of America

I'm just a teenager girl
Against the world
Writing is a passion of mine
But time
Is against me
As strange as that may be
I write songs, parodies, poems, and some essays. I love music. I hope to be able to write for the world one day.

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Haven't had much education on writing and absolutely none on poetry.
Criticism welcomed :)

LyricGirl (United States of America) published:

Immune to Beauty

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they told me i was born seeing in black & white
they spoke of a beauty i could not see
my eyes burn

i thought i could see all the colors
in the bright blue sky
when a rainbow appeared
after a dreary storm,
but they said I did not know beauty
my eyes burn

i say what is beautiful to me
the itchy green grass,
the shades of blue in the night sky,
& a shining ivory moon
yet...

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LyricGirl (United States of America) published:

Loose My Mind

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All I ever do is loose my mind
to the point to where it doesn't feel like its mine.

Oh God, what happened to the time,
I gotta rewind.

The rind
of my soul is loosing rhythm.

Save me Thyme,
why can't you for once be kind?

You let me loose my mind,
and now I doubt anything will be mine.

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LyricGirl (United States of America) published:

Immune to Beauty

FREE WRITING

they told me i was born seeing in black & white
they spoke of a beauty i could not see
my eyes burn

i thought i could see all the colors
in the bright blue sky
when a rainbow appeared
after a dreary storm,
but they said I did not know beauty
my eyes burn

i say what is beautiful to me
the itchy green grass,
the shades of blue in the night sky,
& a shining ivory moon
yet...

Seeking Peer Reviews

9 months ago

1

LyricGirl (United States of America) published:

My Fire

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They say all these things
Tryin’ beat me down
My dreams will never come true
But who are you to tell me what to do

One wood plank after the other
What are you gonna do about it?
Taunting me
Words haunting me
No more!

You’re words don’t mean nothin’ to me-e
They’re fuel to my fire
They’re the coal to my hearth
They’re the fish in my waterfall-all
So come on hit me, crush me, with your

Words I...

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10 months ago

LyricGirl (United States of America) published:

Breathed Me In

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The world
Is spinning ‘round and ‘round
If only I could stop it for a moment
And just
Breathe
Get a hold of myself
And just
Breathe
Hmm
Oh oh. Oh oh

You breathed me in
But I don’t know if this is what I want
You breathed me in
And I felt that I must go on
You breathed me in
I felt as if I had no choice
I’m a slave to myself
In the world I’m a...

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10 months ago

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LyricGirl (United States of America) published:

Blind

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You make me feel like I don’t matter
You make me feel like I could be anything or anyone and you still wouldn’t love me

Could I be like you? On the wall?
Could I have the lights shine on me?
Or am I stuck here in this wilderness
Unable to love or be loved?
Is there light?
Is there anything but this darkness?
Hell I’m blind
Oh oh
I can’t see anything
Oh oh
At least not clearly

I’m...

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10 months ago

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LyricGirl (United States of America) published:

BLANK SPACE MIND

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I feel like I’m slowly falling apart and no one’s listening…

You will never understand me, but you never tried anyway…

I feel nothing now

If only you could see it in my face. If only you could see the lies…

Tell me I’m something…

I feel empty…

She doesn’t look to understand me, so why judge

Is this it?

Who am I?

Help me.

I need someone.

Take me away from here

I’m dying inside. Save me.

Hope is...

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