Aisha Shaikh

Canada

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Aisha Shaikh (Canada) published:

One Great Idea

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

Renée’s parents always scolded her for being impulsive but, she’d insist she was ‘cursed’ for not recognizing a terrible idea. As an adult, nothing changed. It seemed brilliant at first as a farmer to raise wild animals along with her hens. Although, animals notoriously nicknamed as masked bandits were clearly a red flag...

“Izza!” Renée calls to the blonde carpenter while entering her workshop. “About that raccoon hutch you built. Last night, they all escaped and broke into my house!”...

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6 months ago

1

Aisha Shaikh (Canada) published:

One Great Idea

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

Renée’s parents always scolded her for being impulsive but, she’d insist she was ‘cursed’ for not recognizing a terrible idea. As an adult, nothing changed. It seemed brilliant at first as a farmer to raise wild animals along with her hens. Although, animals notoriously nicknamed as masked bandits were clearly a red flag...

“Izza!” Renée calls to the blonde carpenter while entering her workshop. “About that raccoon hutch you built. Last night, they all escaped and broke into my house!”...

Seeking Peer Reviews

6 months ago

Aisha Shaikh (Canada) liked A Simple Man by 7thFall (Australia)

6 months ago

Aisha Shaikh (Canada) reviewed:

Melt (Review for Review)

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

Next time, when time passes, try creating a noticeable space or insert a squiggly line so the reader knows it's a different scene.

6 months ago

Aisha Shaikh (Canada) reviewed:

The Song of Our Hearts

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

Separate your paragraphs clearly so the writing doesn't look daunting as a big chunk of words.

6 months ago

Aisha Shaikh (Canada) started following anemoia (#words) (United States)

6 months ago

Aisha Shaikh (Canada) liked The Song of Our Hearts by ColorsofBeautys (United States)

6 months ago

Aisha Shaikh (Canada) liked The Things Which Can Happen in a Bookstore by anemoia (#words) (United States)

6 months ago

Aisha Shaikh (Canada) reviewed:

Violet the Spy

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

Also loved that you did some research for the Russian food with the pelmeni and kompot

6 months ago

Aisha Shaikh (Canada) reviewed:

place of comfort!

PROMPT: YOU in threes

For next time, try eliminating 'The' from the first paragraph.

It'll make it short and sweet, and the same message can get across without it.

6 months ago