King george iii

inspiremaks14

Switzerland

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inspiremaks14 (Switzerland) published:

Hidden Jewels of the Underground

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition

    Jewel's ears pricked up when she heard a voice calling from beyond the boulder she was approaching.
    "Vanessa!" it called out.
    Jewel had thought she was alone in this part of the tunnels. Clearly, she had been wrong.
    "Vanessa?" the voice repeated, growing desperate.
    Jewel peeked out from behind the boulder and saw a human girl with dark, curly hair and no light in her dark brown eyes. She wondered why a human would be this far underground. They didn't...

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inspiremaks14 (Switzerland) published:

Hidden Jewels of the Underground

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition

    Jewel's ears pricked up when she heard a voice calling from beyond the boulder she was approaching.
    "Vanessa!" it called out.
    Jewel had though she was alone in this part of the tunnels. Clearly, she had been wrong.
    "Vanessa?" the voice repeated, growing desperate.
    Jewel peeked out from behind the boulder and saw a human girl with dark, curly hair and no light in her dark brown eyes. She wondered why a human would be this far underground. They didn't...

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inspiremaks14 (Switzerland) reviewed:

The Wrath of Mother Nature

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition

I would recommend indenting your paragraphs to make the structure easier to read and navigate. Other than that, it's great!

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inspiremaks14 (Switzerland) liked The Wrath of Mother Nature by Julia_C (United States)

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inspiremaks14 (Switzerland) liked Hidden Jewels of the Underground by inspiremaks14 (Switzerland)

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inspiremaks14 (Switzerland) published:

Hidden Jewels of the Underground

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition

       Jewel's ears pricked up when she heard a voice calling from beyond the boulder she was approaching.
   "Vanessa!" it called out.
   Jewel had though she was alone in this part of the cave, clearly, she had been wrong.
   "Vanessa?" the voice repeated, growing desperate.
   Jewel peeked out from behind the boulder and saw a human girl with a mop of curly hair and no light in her dark brown eyes. She wondered why a human would be this far underground....

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