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Carlyle Winter

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Carlyle Winter (Canada) reviewed:

Once He Laughed With Me

PROMPT: Tiny Love Story

I encourage you to continue writing the rest of this story.

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Carlyle Winter (Canada) published:

The Dock

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“Goodmorning”
“But it’s the afternoon”
“........... but it’s still morning somewhere”

October 7th, I think.
    She came up to me first. No doubt about that. She was undoubtedly adorable in her puffy coat and the clumsy umbrella.
“ It is  morning somewhere”
For the first time in a while, I smiled.
    
Down at the pier, where my wife and I would take our son ‘fishing for sharks’.
“Dad! Dad! I got one!”
“You did? Nice job!”
I...
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Carlyle Winter (Canada) published:

The one that doesn't exist

PROMPT: Tiny Love Story

    She looked right through him painfully in complete disappointment.

He stared back in horror from the center of the barren room.

    Silence blanketed the room, for the was nothing that needed to be explained.

He reached out a gentle hand. From her eye shed a tear as she turned away from him. He went to caress her but his arms slipped through. She burst crying.

    “GO!” she screamed, displaying a cross, pushing him back.

“Maria?”

“I’m so sorry Enrique,”

“No,...

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Carlyle Winter (Canada) reviewed:

The King of Sorrows

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2018

To really sell the emotion and contrast and literary stuff, try and make the prince character a bit more relatable to your main character, like change the no-parties-problem to a problem your main character would realistically care about/have.

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Carlyle Winter (Canada) reviewed:

Silhouette

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2018

I love the title, however do not actually see how it fits in the story 100%

9 months ago

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Carlyle Winter (Canada) published:

Out of All the Men Under the Sun

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2018

  It was a great thunder that boomed onto the battlefield. An uproar of warriors rolled down the hill. Worn leather sandals rushed onto their future graves, while our proud troops stood guard. Not a soul had moved passed an invisible barrier we had drawn at our feet. No living flesh could ever break through us.
   Our vigorous army of elite men stood tall and unmovable like great granite pillars : tall, beautiful and strong. Time had seem to move unhurried....

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