Write the World

inkandstars

United States

hello!
new beginnings
new names
formerly palindrome but i needed some change
mostly write short stories and prose
she/her
nerdy athlete
asexual gray romantic
prepping for NaNoWriMo 2020!!!!!

Message from Writer

do what makes you happy. eat what makes you happy. write what makes you happy. be happy! baby you deserve it.
if anybody judges you,
kill them and eat them too

Peer Reviews

the science of caving in #rollthedice4

FREE WRITING

Okay wow this is one of my favorite things ever thanks for writing it you're doing great! I would love to be able to write like you, you have a wonderful talent. Keep sharing it! If you have any questions just let me know

9 months

For Keeps pt. one

FREE WRITING

This was so sweet! One of my favorite characters was the teacher, she was so perfect. The description you used was superb, the writing was top notch! I didn't notice any grammar errors or anything, keep writing! Write free!

9 months

to no avail;

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2019

Keep working, this was so beautiful! I loved the picture you painted, you nailed the feelings. Best of luck!

9 months

If The Seasons Were People [finally revised!]

FREE WRITING

Creative spin on this way of writing. The use of italics and capitalization was pretty, overall you drew me in and kept me interested. Keep writing! If you have any questions or anything, I'll be here

9 months

The Picture

FREE WRITING

Well written and pleasing to read. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but overall well written. Can't wait to read more of your stuff!

9 months

Countdown

FREE WRITING

This was super creative! I liked how meandering it was at first then it came together. A few minor changes for grammar and stuff, but keep writing! Can't wait to read more of your stuff

9 months

Skyscrapers

FREE WRITING

A few changes to the wording will go a long way. I was in love with the rhythm of this piece, the idea was fantastic, all in all very well done! Keep writing my friend

9 months

Flowers beauty#PrettyContest 5

FREE WRITING

Overall pretty good! A few minor changes here and there to make the wording flow better and the description stronger will go a long way. Keep writing!

9 months

what i'd give

FREE WRITING

This was so awesome! The only thing I didn't particularly love was the swearing. I know, compared to the other pieces, this was practically G, but still, it's a sore spot for me. Overall, great job! I'm sorry, I don't highlight much, but there was so much here I didn't know where to start! Write Free, palindrome

about 2 years

Less Than the Birds

FREE WRITING

I didn't understand for the most part what you were trying to say. A few clarifications here and there would make sense. Other than that, this was really creative and cool! Write Free, palindrome

about 2 years

the worst misery i have known

FREE WRITING

Overall this is a great poem, and I really liked the title! This is beautiful, about letting go and moving on, even though it is difficult.

about 2 years

black & blue | 3:56pm

FREE WRITING

I really liked how applicable this is. Take art, for instance, 'Mona Lisa' is pretty, but if you understand that what Leonardo Da Vinci was doing was so unconventional and different, it gave the painting a whole new level of beauty. A damaged person still has worth, still is perfectly imperfect, and has the will and strength of a survivor.

about 2 years

Learning to Accept (edit)

FREE WRITING

I really enjoyed how you used sentences to describe what is going on. Instead of saying, "I hated the freckles I had on my nose." you did a very great job with using description instead of describing. I would indent the beginning of each paragraph, but that is the only problem with grammar I could find. The uplifting last paragraph is something we all could use today. I am totally going to quote you on the last lines!! Write Free, palindrome

about 2 years

Mine #BleedingLove

FREE WRITING

I really liked how you took the darker side of love: jealousy and envy, and put them into your writing. Great job!

about 2 years

The Inner Thoughts of Darina Marcus

PROMPT: Polar Opposite

This is such a different perspective than we normally read. It's really creative! Great job and keep writing!

about 2 years

Almond Blossom

FREE WRITING

I think maybe change Apple/Peacock's nickname a tad. I love where you are going with this, but Aco doesn't make much sense. I really hope you make this a series!

about 2 years

The Deep Blue

FREE WRITING

This is such a poignant piece! I love the ocean, and you wrote so beautifully. I particularly enjoyed how you arranged every other stanza's sentences. Had a pleasing visual effect. Keep writing!

about 2 years

( #FantasyContest ) || of wolves and boys

FREE WRITING

I love the point of view you chose- it makes it more personal, even if the readers don't realize it. Great job, keep writing!

about 2 years

War Stories: Chapter One

FREE WRITING

One tip I find very important for novel writers is to let the story tell itself. For example, instead of saying, "Pam was very tired with bags under her eyes." You might say, "Pam dragged herself down the stairs, rubbing her bloodshot eyes." This is sounding great!

about 2 years

Come Back, Friend

FREE WRITING

Great job, keep writing!

about 2 years

Army Song of a Country I Made Up

FREE WRITING

There were some spelling mistakes, but nobody is perfect. One thing that was a little distracting from the beauty of the writing was the exclamation marks. Maybe a little less, but overall good job!

about 2 years

Draw a Star

FREE WRITING

So for the Corner Writing Club, we are reviewing partners. I will review a piece of yours every week and vice versa. I look forward to reading more of your work!

about 2 years