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BlueEyesBaby

United States

"I don't even know my own self, so who can know me?"
- Min Yoongi

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BlueEyesBaby (United States) reviewed:

To Writing Immortal Stories

PROMPT: Why I Write

I'm a little confused on the line, "the gullible me says, "count me in!" Is your younger self gullible for thinking Journalism was easy or what would be in your league? Or does it mean you fell into the trap...

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BlueEyesBaby (United States) published:

Pencil

FREE WRITING

What was once life is now in the palm of our hands
It's body perfectly structured
Only to be crushed
By sharp knives that takes out the best
Again and again
Until its use is no longer needed

Words are formed by the pressure you bring it
Either noting down something important
Or your silly notes that aren't considered important
All of our secrets are kept within it's charcoal
Trapping those very words deep inside of themselves

It is us...

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BlueEyesBaby (United States) published:

Dreams

FREE WRITING

We're a world of Penguins
Our heads always raised to the skies
Floating on cloud 9
Flapping around our spirits

Our eyes seek flight
Yet our body stayed glued down
Impossible dreams in arms reach
Our minds clouded with false hope

The world is our hell
Our flaws and burdens buried beneath
Dirt and grass disguised as our euphoria
The land covered in nightmares

Above is our heaven
Where light destroys our demons
Love being the last stop
On this roller coaster

Our...

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BlueEyesBaby (United States) published:

Spring Day

FREE WRITING

The darkness takes a while to disappear
Leaving us in this long cold lonely state
Forcing us into never ending fear
Tricking us further in the cage with bait
The ice is slowly seeking in the heart
Lives slowly breaking from reality
Destroying our memories like it's art
The end of life beginning with a tree
Light finally shining through the dark clouds
Waking everyone up from their deep sleep
Finally able to escape the crowds
The fresh air suddenly...

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8 months ago

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BlueEyesBaby (United States) published:

Who's Right?

FREE WRITING

Fly North for Freedom
Fly South for Imprisonment
In This Fight, Who's Right?

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BlueEyesBaby (United States) published:

Let's Play A Game

FREE WRITING

Red and black marks the battleground
Shadows of heroes appear in the background
The leaders decide every move taken
Waiting for their chance to be reawaken
Pawns used as bait
The knight swoop in to protect
The rook straightly coming in to save those in need
The bishop waits, giving advice to the Queen and King
Each have a role in this game of life or death
Step by step someone wins or loses
In the end, there are no excuses ...

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8 months ago

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BlueEyesBaby (United States) published:

Bottom's Dream

FREE WRITING

Eyes, do you see what I see
Such a rare vision
In the O grim night, moon shining
There cursed me with an ass head
Half his face deceiving me
Name what I am

In truth, I cannot abide
Fright voices call forth, "Away, go away"
Man by man pull out weapons
Where are their hearts?
Blink through mine eyne!
Take my pain
My eyes water ever now

Methinks I was not perfect
But I can do any man's heart...

8 months ago