Z.Bunzigiye

Canada

Hi guys!!
About me:
* I'm from Toronto (because that is a personality trait lol)
* I'm an Aries
* Senior Peer Reviewer: Former Write the World young writer, now mentoring other WtW young writers through peer reviews!

Message from Writer

I'm a post-secondary student now. So if you have any questions, remarks, concerns, please bear with me because it would take me some time (1-2 days) to get back to you.

Z.Bunzigiye (Canada) reviewed:

i am the daughter of pain and love.

FREE WRITING

Please keep writing. I've never seen a piece like this before. This feels like the beginning of a novel or something. So unique. I really feel like my imagination has been stimulated and now I'm wondering what will happen next....

6 days ago

Z.Bunzigiye (Canada) liked I Forget That I Am Poor by Sparthens (New Zealand)

6 days ago

Z.Bunzigiye (Canada) reviewed:

Homeless not hopeless

FREE WRITING

Keep it up, this is a promising effort and I look to seeing that book of yours on shelves soon! :))

4 months ago

Z.Bunzigiye (Canada) reviewed:

belgium is built on rotted flesh

FREE WRITING

I think that as a person whose ancestors were affected by this, this poem is a lot. It's well-written but it's triggering and I suggest that you remain mindful of the voice you have as a writer when writing about...

4 months ago

Z.Bunzigiye (Canada) reviewed:

7 Joys of Knowing You

PROMPT: Seven Delights

Quick question: when it says "Don't hide who you are", who is the speaker? Is it the narrator or their special someone? It kind of gives a double meaning to the line which made me linger on it. Otherwise, good...

4 months ago

Z.Bunzigiye (Canada) reviewed:

The Black Death was caused by my History Teacher. Braided Writing

FREE WRITING

Please remain mindful of the text's format. I know that this is a braided narrative so it makes sense that there are lines of text on their own. It provided the story with tension in the story and made it...

4 months ago

Z.Bunzigiye (Canada) reviewed:

Spoken into existence

FREE WRITING

I feel like that you're building on the idea of manifesting something into existence but it feels incomplete. This feels like an excerpt from a novel. The reader needs catharsis because the narrative brings the emotions to a fever pitch...

5 months ago

Z.Bunzigiye (Canada) reviewed:

Of Legacies and Questions

FREE WRITING

The narrative keeps the theme intact. I know that's what you wanted feedback on. Some concrete example would be the usage of words such as "remember", "stories", "history", "year", "memories", "fade", "legacy". The lexicon is consistent. Also, the clever analogy...

5 months ago

Z.Bunzigiye (Canada) reviewed:

Solar Panels: Positive or Negative Effect on the Environment?

PROMPT: Environmental Journalism Competition 2020

Do also remember to present alternative solutions to solar panels. It's quite disappointing to learn that they're not the miracle technology that I thought they were. So maybe, as a next step, you could present the reader at the end...

5 months ago

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5 months ago