Ohyouknow..

United States of America

Im 13
I write poems
I’m really gay
I’m an ARMY
Aaaaaaand I would really appreciate feedback my dudes!

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Hello! I’m 13 and I love writing poetry. Check out some of my writing if you want and I would love to have some feedback

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Coffee shop

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I start my quest
At the front door 
Reading my directions 
Carefully
I turn right 
Walking down
The uneven sidewalk 
Through rows of
Mismatched houses
Now.
Down the
Sloping 
Hill
These houses
Look as if
They could slide
Right off their yards;
My feet wobble
On the cracked pavement 
And I sing 
A quiet song.
First 
Road
 
Breathe in

Walk 
Walk
Walk

Breath out.

A house with
Lace curtains 
Tall
Brown
And empty 

A stone woman 
Is standing 
In...

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Pool

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I have my
New
Bathing suit
With polka dots
And floral print 

We stand
At the counter
And buy some
“No leak goggles “
Which are next to the popcorn 
And the slushy machine .

I pick clear ones
So I can see everything 
Around me
And 
Even though
The girl behind the counter 
(Urgently)
Informs me 
That there are also pink goggles 
I still say no
And hope that 
These goggles 
Live up to their name.

The 
Water
Is ...

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Empty again...

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Miles away 
Trapped
Within 
Without 
A place 
With no borders 
The trill of white noise 
And broken records 

Please 
Give me a glass
Of water
So I can wash away the words
I never had the courage 
To say.

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Panic attack

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I’m in outer space
Without a helmet 
Everything would be so 
Beautiful here
If only
I could
Breathe.
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