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SparklingEmbers

United States

Born an Ember
Growing a Flame
Now a Fire
Love to Write
Dream to Aspire

Message from Writer

Don't forget to have a good day :)

Peer Reviews

green green green #home

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This was fantastic Good luck!!

26 days ago

A Summer Cabin #Home Contest

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This piece was really well done! Good luck!!

29 days ago

Out of the Woods #Home

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I would just double check grammar , other than that it was great! Good luck!

about 1 month ago

everywhere

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This was really sad and emotional and its such a talent to convey an emotion and make the reader feel such a strong emotion, nice job! :)

4 months ago

Normal (revised)

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This is incredible. It's really strange to think that something we wish to be could not exist (as I said already) and you do a really good job of conveying what it means to be "normal" I'm really impressed and this is so deep :)

4 months ago

Bread

PROMPT: Food Writing Competition 2019

The end was a little sad because it shows that each person has to move on, and I really enjoy the life you add in each step of this. You say how you learned patience and you had to move away and it was really special.

4 months ago

She's the Wanderer, He's the Navigator

PROMPT: A Pair of Poems

The description is great and the poem is really well done. I love the different roles in this poem. You have a lot of description already but if you could maybe add a little bit of where the wanderer has been, some description. I love the differing prospectives and how they show differing attitudes and personalities.

4 months ago

Society's Image of Strength

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4 months ago

My Artemis

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This was really descriptive and I love your writing style!!

4 months ago

The Stable Boy

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Everything is really well done :)

4 months ago

The Forest Scholar

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2019

This was a really great poem!!

4 months ago

thoughts from an airplane

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This is such a great poem and it really shifted my perspective. Through this I can visually see all the things you explained and can also see that you are an incredible poet!!

8 months ago