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[maggie]

United States

15
Musician--ig @CloudsonHighOfficial
https://www.roarsandwhispersphs.com/

Message from Writer

I've been told I lack imagery in my writing, and I tend to tell too much and not show enough. Very rarely do I have the patience for prose, and my poetry tends to feel musical, which isn't bad, but it gets flat after a while. I could use some overall writing advice.

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[maggie] (United States) reviewed:

mania?

PROMPT: 180

I fell in love with the way the piece transitioned from the heavy tone to the ecstatic tone

about 7 hours ago

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[maggie] (United States) reviewed:

Poison

PROMPT: Open Prompt

Add more imagery and expand on the poison motif. Overall, its a great concept

about 7 hours ago

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[maggie] (United States) reviewed:

Fall #cwcfirstcontest

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Overall a beautiful piece filled with emotion, and it doesn't tell you everything, you have to resonate with the text and let it simmer before you understand all the layers of emotion

about 7 hours ago

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[maggie] (United States) published:

I met my angel in Hell

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    I constantly hear about people making simple changes in hopes to accomplish a happier existence. My mom recently discovered the wheatgrass shake; she declares to anyone who will listen how much energy she has now that she starts her morning off indulging in a bitter green smoothie. The problem with small efforts like this one is people expect by changing this one part of their life, and the true root of their unhappiness remains untouched. If a person wants to change,...

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[maggie] (United States) published:

I met my angel in Hell

FREE WRITING

    I constantly hear about people making simple changes in hopes to accomplish a happier existence. My mom recently discovered the wheatgrass shake; she declares to anyone who will listen how much energy she has now that she starts her morning off indulging in a bitter green smoothie. The problem with small efforts like this one is people expect by changing this one part of their life, and the true root of their unhappiness remains untouched. If a person wants to change,...

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[maggie] (United States) liked Against the wind by Norajo92 (United States)

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