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[maggie]

United States

15
Musician--ig @CloudsonHighOfficial
https://www.roarsandwhispersphs.com/

Message from Writer

I've been told I lack imagery in my writing, and I tend to tell too much and not show enough. Very rarely do I have the patience for prose, and my poetry tends to feel musical, which isn't bad, but it gets flat after a while. I could use some overall writing advice.

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[maggie] (United States) reviewed:

Underestimated (An action scene attempt by me)

FREE WRITING

I love how you connect the title directly to the text towards the end

about 2 months ago

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[maggie] (United States) liked #Littlestories by LackingASocialLife (Australia)

3 months ago

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[maggie] (United States) reviewed:

Poison

PROMPT: Open Prompt

Add more imagery and expand on the poison motif. Overall, its a great concept

3 months ago

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3 months ago

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3 months ago

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