Michelle20

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Michelle20 (United States) published:

Sonnet of Fear

PROMPT: Environmental Writing Competition September 2018

Late-night driving down a long, winding road,
Bright headlights illuminate the wide street.
Eyes start to close; I was tired, and it showed.
Radio pop song playing on repeat.

A flash of brown and white in front of me,
The squeal of my car’s brakes is ear-splitting.
Mother and fawn gaze at me, but don’t flee.
The fear in their eyes is unremitting.

My hands shake as I grip the steering wheel.
Blood pumping quickly; vision blurred by tears.
No...

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Michelle20 (United States) reviewed:

Beautiful but Dark

PROMPT: Environmental Writing Competition September 2018

I think that this is a very strong piece! I could be wrong with some of the grammar/spelling mistakes that I highlighted, but I would suggest that you use an online grammar/spelling checker on all of your work. I always...

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Michelle20 (United States) published:

Sonnet of Fear

PROMPT: Environmental Writing Competition September 2018

Late-night driving down a long, winding road,
Bright headlights illuminate the wide street.
Eyes start to close; I was tired, and it showed.
Radio pop song playing on repeat.

A flash of brown and white in front of me,
The squeal of my car’s brakes is ear-splitting.
Mother and fawn gaze at me, but don’t flee.
The fear in their eyes is unremitting.

I glance at my little sedan and think,
I could have killed two animals today.
Two innocent...

Seeking Peer Reviews

almost 3 years ago