Great work and keep writing! This was the second of your reviews for winning our contest. I'm really sorry it's taken so long.
11 months ago
Aside from a few notes in the highlighted section, this piece is fantastic and well-written. Great work. Sometime in the next week, you will most likely receive another review from Corner Writing Club.
12 months ago
PROMPT: Environmental Writing Competition September 2018
I greatly enjoyed reading this poem, and keep writing! More reviews for you will come from Corner Writing Club soon.
12 months ago
Most of what I have to say, I've said in the other boxes or highlighted lines. This is excellent, filled with rich figurative language, small details that tie the piece together, and vivid imagery that paints a clear picture of the coffee shop for the reader. While the main focus of the piece isn't on the character, they do have a little internal thought, and from this and the tone placed in the descriptions, we get an idea of who they are. I honestly don't know what problems you're talking about in your message; this is brilliant. It's clever, short but says what it has to say. So onto what could be improved. There were, like, one or two lines that were phrased awkwardly or could've been clearer, and I highlighted and commented on these, but that was it. To sum it all up, great work! I would definitely read more of this if you chose to expand it. Keep writing!
about 1 year ago