rafaelsolanoishot

United States

hola! idk what to put here really lol

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you are amazing, always remember that! writing tip: overthinking is killer in writing, write first edit later!

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rafaelsolanoishot (United States) published:

princess envy

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his heart is with my sister
but she's ugly, a drag, and like a painful blister
he's hot, mysterious and the cream of the crop
my sister looks like she's all fat on top
i don't know what he sees in her, she's really not his type
i'm more elegant, refined, and a delight
just call me whenever, henry, cause i'll be waiting
don't mind my sister
her future is mine for the taking

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bottom eleven things

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1. anxiety. hate the tightening feeling. hate they way it distracts from what's going on around me. hate the way it sucks me into my thoughts and clouds my clear thinking. hate. it.
2. vomit. My puke is gross but other peoples?? I can't stand it. Especially not knowing who puked and just walking by somewhere smelling it. and amusements parks are the worst. You can still smell the funnel cakes and rusty metal but there's always an overpowering stench...

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rafaelsolanoishot (United States) liked forbidden prison of memories by happygiggles (Ireland)

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rafaelsolanoishot (United States) liked a lyric prompt (see footnotes) by useless :) (United States)

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top *eleven* things

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1. fall. not like we have here in texas, where a 70 degree day is considered fall, but real fall. like they have in conneticut and up north. where the leaves turn magnificient hues of red and almost everyday is windy. where you're not sweating in your flannel loll
2. babies smiling. but like, how can you not agree with this? babies are cute but when they SMILE? aaah
3. indie music. some of my favs are clairo, the neighborhood,...

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rafaelsolanoishot (United States) liked drawn by Writing4Life (Australia)

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light does exist

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wow, it's new
everything is happy
I cry tears of joy during the rainstorms
I smile even when my pride is destroyed
I appreciate the little things and don't constantly beat myself up about shit
I feel free
I feel like I can breathe
really breathe
i feel like I'm breathing in cold air but being wrapped in a cloud at the same time
i feel safe, somehow
despite the dangerous paths I've walked down
there is light
at the...

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rafaelsolanoishot (United States) published:

struck

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dumbstruck and lightning
don't mix well
if I were to wish in wishing well
it would have been for you
lucky me
my wish has come true
 but somethings off
am I not grateful for you, my wish come true?
or does the porcelain on your face have a few cracks?
attacks
I didn't see coming,
sister
 

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rafaelsolanoishot (United States) published:

rosey

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Rose twisted face
scornful words
a place
I never understood
it takes me back
your words attack
my raw spots
but I don't feel them
I'm already numb

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time stops when i'm with you

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Mateo:

"Do you want to go on a date", Mateo asked a little too excitedly. Much to his luck, a small smile formed on Harper's face. It was rare, for her to smile like that. With everything going on at home, she always showed up to school in the worst moods. Nothing could make her happy, except Starbucks and apparently this. She looked down at her shoes for a second before she declared " I mean... I thought it would...

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