lina13 (Australia) published:
PROMPT: Love in Words
I remember that my parents were so careful to prepare me for you. They would tell me that you were coming, and told me stories about the importance of sharing. I read picture books that explained that older siblings shouldn’t be jealous when younger siblings receive more attention; babies need more care, after all. My mother took my hand and placed it on her swollen stomach, explaining gently that I would no longer be the only child in the family....
about 2 years ago
lina13 (Australia) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
Overall, I love this poem! I think you've captured a very small, specific moment, and made it very universal and meaningful for every reader. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading your future writing!
about 2 years ago
lina13 (Australia) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
(Just a note that these comments are my personal opinion only. As the writer, you have full creative control over your piece, and you get to decide to what extent you implement my feedback). Overall, I was thoroughly impressed by...
about 2 years ago
lina13 (Australia) published:
PROMPT: Open Prompt
Last Tuesday, Australian politics was shaken up as Julia Banks announced that she was quitting the Liberal Party, a decision that will have repercussions on the power of the Liberal Party in the House of Representatives, with now a firm minority of only 74 seats. In the current period of uncertainty and petty back-and-forth between the Liberal and Labor parties in the lead-up to the May election of 2019, this latest blow will undoubtedly cause problems for the Liberals.
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about 2 years ago
lina13 (Australia) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
Overall, congratulations on writing a poem that plays with structure, punctuation and formatting in a really clever and creative way. If you were looking for some inspiration on physically innovative poems, I'd check out ee cummings (one of my all-time...
about 2 years ago
lina13 (Australia) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
Congratulations on writing a really unique and effective story that deals with multiple layers of emotions! It's always very challenging to write about loss, because it's a raw emotion that's difficult to transfer onto the page. If you wanted some...
about 2 years ago
lina13 (Australia) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
Overall, well done writing an expressive, unique story! I'd encourage you to expand on this very solid foundation by providing a little more detail, characteriation and plot, but at the end of the day, you've done a very good job....
about 2 years ago
lina13 (Australia) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this piece! It was well-written with a unique concept, and I'd encourage you to keep writing!
about 2 years ago
lina13 (Australia) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
Overall, keep up the good work! It was a pleasure to read your work.
about 2 years ago