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bluemoonrider079

Australia

Heyo!
Aussie Gal here, love poetry and narrative writing! I'm also horsey! looooovveee animals.
All feedback appreciated! negative and positive!

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Blue Xx

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Rumour

FREE WRITING

Today, a girl was found crying,
The day before, her parents had died.
From a car crash, coming home.
Tomorrow, she'll be diagnosed with cancer.
Curiosity and Whispers filled the air, 
No one seemed to care.

As people shared their thoughts,
round, and round, the big playground,
Someone shouted 'She's a sook! she has no friends! That's all!'

Now people laugh, people point, people stare.
Each week, the girl comes to school,
Becoming weaker, and weaker.
Skinnier, and skinnier.
Until...

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Rumour

FREE WRITING

Today, a girl was found crying,
The day before, her parents had died.
From a car crash, coming home.
Tomorrow, she'll be diagnosed with cancer.
Curiosity and Whispers filled the air, 
No one seemed to care.

As people shared their thoughts,
round, and round, the big playground,
Someone shouted 'She's a sook! she has no friends! That's all!'

Now people laugh, people point, people stare.
Each week, the girl comes to school,
Becoming weaker, and weaker.
Skinnier, and skinnier.
Until...

about 1 year ago

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I'd Rather Be

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Although I've been bred for the racing track,
The talent to race, i happen to lack.
Chasing the lure was just soo unappealing, no fun.

I'd rather be a normal pup,
Where i could sleep, play- even jump!
Or to be curled up on the couch,
Watching, Waiting, Staring.
For the leftovers of your lunch!

I'd rather be taking a walk in the park,
Sleep on the bed,
Mailman's coming, let's bark!
You can pat me on the head,
Tell...

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Could You Imagine?

PROMPT: Unplug

Could you possibly believe in leaving your phone? 
Tablet? I-Pad? Laptop and so? 
Could you imagine not ever knowing what a Television is? 
Netflix? X-Box? Play Station? or even a Wii? 

Have you ever noticed- 
The beauty outside? 
The life that's been given to us to enjoy- 
But instead we'd rather destroy. 
Not appreciating our world, 
All we do, is sit, stare and watch our screens. 

Our lives evolve around fame- 
Notifications, Facebook and games. 
Oh don't forgot the recent...

about 1 year ago