RockSugar98

Singapore

Former Write The World young writer hoping to help other young writers to improve through peer reviews.
Also a retired teenager. Semi-sweet and a little nutty.

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Hello you who read this line! Have you had a smile today?

RockSugar98 (Singapore) started following RockSugar98 (Singapore)

2 months ago

RockSugar98 (Singapore) reviewed:

I CAN

PROMPT: Mid-December Grab Bag

Hello there! I really liked this little story and the lovely hidden message. Thank you for sharing your writing here on Write the World, and here's looking forward to more from you in the future. Additionally, I'm not sure if...

2 months ago

RockSugar98 (Singapore) reviewed:

Lament for Calendula ~ Part II

FREE WRITING

Hello there! I think your piece shows a lot of promise where you're able to zoom into a personal exchange and create an ambiance immediately with the little poem at the start. However, it is a good idea to also...

3 months ago

RockSugar98 (Singapore) reviewed:

The World Looks Down On Us

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2020

Wonderful write on your part! I really enjoyed reading this poem. However, there are some words that could have been a little inapt in the context they were used. They would have been highlighted for you. Whilst the main idea...

10 months ago

RockSugar98 (Singapore) reviewed:

Mathematics #1stchallenge

FREE WRITING

Lovely little poem with wonderful grammar. I really don't have much to say about your piece except that it demonstrates grit and perseverance in solving math problems and a witty little beginning line. Overall, a job well done. Here's hoping...

10 months ago

RockSugar98 (Singapore) reviewed:

Rubies and Moonlight

FREE WRITING

It had been a pleasure to have read your work, thank you for sharing it on Write the World. :) It's no doubt that you demonstrate strong competence in employing vivid descriptions that facilitate imagination. Kudos to you on a...

10 months ago

RockSugar98 (Singapore) reviewed:

Let’s Scratch Ourselves on the Blackberry Bushes Until We Feel Young Again // Escapril Day 4 (Earthly Pleasures!)

FREE WRITING

It's really a very lovely poem that had me smile involuntarily and feel a tiny nostalgia. I really don't have much to say before an elegant work like yours. :) Keep writing, and I hope to see more from you...

11 months ago

RockSugar98 (Singapore) reviewed:

The Dying Flower

FREE WRITING

Your poem had an ethereal feel about it, which I liked a lot. :) You had attempted to describe the character's story with three themes, 1) nature (i.e. flowers, stardust and dew); 2) transcendence (i.e. chariot of time; "playing one's...

11 months ago

RockSugar98 (Singapore) reviewed:

Pretty Birds, War Soldiers

FREE WRITING

Your piece is, no doubt, a wonderful read. I like that you have done some research to make your characters to speak like they were in the 1940s, keep up the good work. However, there are some issues that you...

about 1 year ago

RockSugar98 (Singapore) reviewed:

Tout le monde

PROMPT: One Home

It's a good write, definitely! I shall always be amazed at how you can write this poem within a few minutes and be in awe of how deeply you would have reflected in daily life. I wonder how this piece...

about 1 year ago