Hello there! I really liked this little story and the lovely hidden message. Thank you for sharing your writing here on Write the World, and here's looking forward to more from you in the future. Additionally, I'm not sure if...

Hello there! I think your piece shows a lot of promise where you're able to zoom into a personal exchange and create an ambiance immediately with the little poem at the start. However, it is a good idea to also...

Wonderful write on your part! I really enjoyed reading this poem. However, there are some words that could have been a little inapt in the context they were used. They would have been highlighted for you. Whilst the main idea...

Lovely little poem with wonderful grammar. I really don't have much to say about your piece except that it demonstrates grit and perseverance in solving math problems and a witty little beginning line. Overall, a job well done. Here's hoping...

It had been a pleasure to have read your work, thank you for sharing it on Write the World. :) It's no doubt that you demonstrate strong competence in employing vivid descriptions that facilitate imagination. Kudos to you on a...

It's really a very lovely poem that had me smile involuntarily and feel a tiny nostalgia. I really don't have much to say before an elegant work like yours. :) Keep writing, and I hope to see more from you...

Your poem had an ethereal feel about it, which I liked a lot. :) You had attempted to describe the character's story with three themes, 1) nature (i.e. flowers, stardust and dew); 2) transcendence (i.e. chariot of time; "playing one's...

Your piece is, no doubt, a wonderful read. I like that you have done some research to make your characters to speak like they were in the 1940s, keep up the good work. However, there are some issues that you...

It's a good write, definitely! I shall always be amazed at how you can write this poem within a few minutes and be in awe of how deeply you would have reflected in daily life. I wonder how this piece...