Your piece is, no doubt, a wonderful read. I like that you have done some research to make your characters to speak like they were in the 1940s, keep up the good work. However, there are some issues that you...

It's a good write, definitely! I shall always be amazed at how you can write this poem within a few minutes and be in awe of how deeply you would have reflected in daily life. I wonder how this piece...

It's wonderful to read poems like yours that can make readers feel the intense emotions pulsating through the stanzas and in the end, draw to an elegant calming close. On a deeper level, it's also heartening to know that you...

Excellent job writing this absolutely elegant piece, and thank you for sharing. It might be a good idea perhaps to try to expand this piece further into a longer piece of writing. What further things did the duo engage in...