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Slugish

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Ugh... introductions. I need coffee...Sip...Ahh...Ok...Wait.Sip...
Ok I'm ready now.
I am the Editor in Chief of my high school's Creative Writing Club and I love reading, eating, and sleeping and coffee, but I do enjoy the occasional cup of tea.

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I put a lot of love into my work it seems that a piece of me goes into each of my writing.

Some other things to know is that I love the Harry Potter series but I never actually read any of the books, just watched the movies. I know shame on me. I'm getting around to it though. I am a Ravenclaw and Thunderbird but I'm just a well-rounded person. I can be caught up in some mischief as well as shy, which can just be seen as me ignoring the person, and I can be incredibly loud and full of contradictions.

Also a quote I love from the Torch Song Trilogy:
“There's one more thing you better understand…There's nothing I need from anyone except for love and respect and anyone who can't give me those two things has no place in my life.”

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Slugish (United States) reviewed:

Dreaming Big

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It is a very clean poem. I like reviewing your poems. I wouldn't change a thing about this one.

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What if...

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I would only want to change one thing and that would be line 11. Instead of "your peers" how about "them", it would be more ambiguous and more personal for the reader. "your peers" seems to me to have a...

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Slugish (United States) published:

Light Rail

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Swish swish
The floor moves side to side
Back and forth
I clamor on with everyone else
Carry my luggage and bike in tow
There is no spot for me
So here I stand
The floor moving beneath me

Swish swish
We are all rocking
Simply one with the motion
The floor rocking beneath us
Everyone else is sitting
It seems
I am carrying a heavy weight
My bag weighs me down

Swish swish
I am falling
I extend my...

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Slugish (United States) published:

Tell Me Again But Know That I Heard It All Before, From Everytime I Tell Myself The Same Thing

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I could ignore him. I know he is not worth the tears. The screaming, the arguing, the pain. You tell me every time to take his words like a grain of salt, but you don’t seem to understand that even a gain of salt and cause so much suffering. I hold open the flesh wound of my heart and it is painful when everyday he grinds it in. You don’t seem to understand how many words he says to me...

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Slugish (United States) published:

Eye of the Beholder

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Have you ever wondered why we always seem happier as children?
 
I think it was in the fourth grade that I lose my childhood lens that I looked through to see the world. It was in the fourth grade when I really looked at myself in the mirror. When kids would pass me by and point at my shoes and say “What are those!”. That phrase made no sense to me. And I knew it they didn’t fully understand...

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