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Carpizza

Australia

Hi! I love writing short stories (when I have time), I kinda want to start writing poetry and I love constructive criticism on both grammar/spelling and content. :)

Disclaimer: I'm shockingly bad at spelling & grammar

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I love constructive criticism on both grammar/spelling and content. I hope you enjoy my works :)

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Dear Ambition

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Dear ambition,

I've decided if you were a colour you'd be a burnt orange hue.
I have no explanation why, besides how you twirl me into the fires of hopes and dreams
Name engraved into the books of history, but, maybe I missed my cue,
Monopolised by sweet schemes,

As much as I revolt at becoming my dad,
We may not have the same eyes but we have the same smile.
Washed out faces, eyes wrinkling as were trapped in...

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Colours

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I’ve always hated the colour orange. To me the colour is awkwardly obnoxious like that one eccentric student who aims to be popular only for their ambitions to become the punch-line.

I was underneath deep navy blue sky, accompanied by the contrasting tiger street lights that glowed just as much as me. As a small, wide-eyed, three year-old, my scarf hardly hid the tracheostomy as I rode my rusty red tricycle around the hospital the third time. My mum followed...

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All the things I'll never tell you

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All the things I'll never tell you;

Starting from your keen observation skills noticing the unspoken conversations,
Although your bladed sharp wit can be intimidating,
The low hum in your voice indicates otherwise,
You're a gentle giant.
Or at least gentle,
I'm just short.

As you're aware emotional vulnerability is the sickly, enclosing truth that I always choke on.
But I'm trying to change my apologies to gratefulness so please bear with me

Throughout our forgotten bickering
The bruises and...

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Subtotals

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32 breaths per minute, 6 bruises on my knees,  2 scars from surgery, at least 25 operations 250 trips to the emergency room, annual doctor appointments.

4 cats 2 dogs 6 close friends, 1 best friend, 2 boyfriends 1 girlfriend yet never had a first kiss.
1 hour worth of relaxation, jumping between 6 and 12 hours of sleep, at least 5,000 steps per day, 2 busses to and back to school, moved schools twice,

I own 5 albums, 3...

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