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Alyssa W

Canada

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Alyssa W (Canada) liked Finding Truth on the Lost Coast by sincerelyclaire (United States)

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Alyssa W (Canada) published:

Second Nature

PROMPT: Personal Narrative Competition 2018

“Well, what about you? Are you going to get a boyfriend?” My mom asks jokingly after I finish the story of how my friend and her boyfriend got together. Her voice is light and easy, because this is what normal, straight people do. Tease each other over not having boyfriends and not some homophobe yelling at you and your metaphorical girlfriend for holding hands. 

“Oh my god, no.” It comes out forceful enough and lighthearted like I wanted it to,...

about 1 year ago

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Alyssa W (Canada) reviewed:

Because Music Keeps my Heart Beating

PROMPT: Personal Narrative Competition 2018

In general, I feel like you can go into more detail with this, especially how you're feeling. You can slow moments that are important down by adding more detail- especially the end or the time when you're practicing with friends....

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Alyssa W (Canada) liked Because Music Keeps my Heart Beating by Vannah Mills (United States)

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Alyssa W (Canada) published:

Second Nature

PROMPT: Personal Narrative Competition 2018

“Well, what about you? Are you going to get a boyfriend?” My mom asks jokingly after I finish the story of how my friend and her boyfriend got together. Her voice is light and easy, because this is what normal, straight people do. Tease each other over not having boyfriends and not some homophobe yelling at you and your metaphorical girlfriend for holding hands. 

“Oh my god, no.” It comes out forceful enough and lighthearted like I wanted it to,...

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