CaisidePoetry

United States

Just trying to find the words for the thoughts in my head.
Feminist, environmentalist, poet.

Message from Writer

Poetry helps us preserve the present moment, as if we could take a photo of right now and keep it forever.

Peer Reviews

The Truth

FREE WRITING

I really loved this piece. It feels so real. Never stop writing!

almost 2 years

Music

FREE WRITING

This is an amazing piece, and very true. It’s such a great read and I’ll love to see more of your work in the future!

about 2 years

I'm...Nothing

FREE WRITING

I think you did a very good job of capturing and conveying these emotions. However, I do notice that the rhyme scheme gave the piece a very staggered, amusing sort of feel. I feel that rhyming in poems normally gives the piece a more fun and light tone, and this piece is obviously meant to feel much darker. Looking at some of your past work, I notice that many of your other pieces utilize a rhyme scheme as well - I would love to see what you could do without the limitations of a rhyming pattern

about 2 years