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Tofu(づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ (Canada) reviewed:
PROMPT: Open Prompt
I love your story. Please keep writing! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧
almost 3 years ago
Tofu(づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ (Canada) reviewed:
PROMPT: Given First Line
The story doesn't really have a climax. Please try to add one as you continue to edit this story. Overall, it's great, but needs some tweaking.
almost 3 years ago
Tofu(づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ (Canada) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
Maybe you can make stanzas instead of just one big stanza.
almost 3 years ago
Tofu(づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ (Canada) reviewed:
PROMPT: Science Fiction Competition 2018
To make your story look better to the eyes, I suggest adding an indent. I always add three spaces to the start of my paragraph as indents.
almost 3 years ago