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Tofu(づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ

Canada

A broke 13-year-old who makes money by selling short stories and drawing art on Instagram.

Message from Writer

The best writers are not the people who wrote 5 sentences and then quit. The best writers are the people who wrote 5 sentences, read it over, read it again, and edited it before moving on.

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Tofu(づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ (Canada) liked painting your own sun. by temy (New Zealand)

12 months ago

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Tofu(づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ (Canada) liked Monostitch Quote by paperbird (United States)

over 1 year ago

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Tofu(づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ (Canada) liked For My Grandfather by Sofiemarti5 (United States)

over 1 year ago

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Tofu(づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ (Canada) liked The Milky-Way by kdxt4life (Australia)

over 1 year ago

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over 1 year ago

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Tofu(づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ (Canada) reviewed:

The Third Shadow

PROMPT: Open Prompt

I love your story. Please keep writing! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧

over 1 year ago

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Tofu(づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ (Canada) reviewed:

Snow Fall

PROMPT: Given First Line

The story doesn't really have a climax. Please try to add one as you continue to edit this story. Overall, it's great, but needs some tweaking.

over 1 year ago

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Tofu(づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ (Canada) reviewed:

Seasick

FREE WRITING

Maybe you can make stanzas instead of just one big stanza.

over 1 year ago

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Tofu(づ。◕‿‿◕。)づ (Canada) reviewed:

Under the sea

PROMPT: Science Fiction Competition 2018

To make your story look better to the eyes, I suggest adding an indent. I always add three spaces to the start of my paragraph as indents.

over 1 year ago