This piece has a sad, yet amazing premise. I'm so happy you decided to write a piece like this. I was expecting it to have a happy ending, but it didn't. Some pieces just don't, and that's absolutely fine. Your...

I love how you also added good aspects apart from just sad or questionable headlines! I realized a lot of pieces under this prompt consist of mostly bad things happening. There's nothing wrong with that at all, but it's amazing...

I really love these metaphors! I think you have such interesting ideas! I wish I had as amazing ideas!

Keep on writing! If you have any questions about this piece you need answered, I'm right here! :)

- Karen

I think this a very good piece of writing. I would love to see you write a short-story inspired by this poem. I feel like this poem could be so much more! I really enjoy the message of this poem,...

I honestly love this metaphor! It made me think about the moon in a different way. To me, the moon is just the moon and nothing else. But, in this piece, you brought up stuff that made me think more...