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parachutes

Canada

I write for my past, present, and future.

Message from Writer

Live dangerous, be yourself, and never give a fudgenugget.

Peer Reviews

Lavender

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition

This is very VERY well written. Thank you for sha I gotta this piece with me, and the WtW community. Best of luck with the contest! I’m rooting for you!

9 days ago

Curse you, Jared

FREE WRITING

I really like this. CURSE YOU JARED, CURSE YOU! lol -parachutes

13 days ago

The Woodland Forest

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition

I would love to see this as a series. Great job! -parachutes

13 days ago

Just A Step

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition

Where did this concept come from? It’s really cool. Also, where’d Ab’negals name originate from. It’s a super groovy name. Best of luck with the contest!

14 days ago

Hangnail

PROMPT: Semicolon Soirée

This is a really good piece, and I feel like you did an amazing job! Good work!

21 days ago

To Find A Reason, When We Just Weren’t Born To Do So

FREE WRITING

This piece is so interesting. Thank you for steering me in the right direction towards finding my purpose <3

21 days ago

The Storm

FREE WRITING

I am in love with this! It’s just really great. Good job!

21 days ago

It knows I know

FREE WRITING

I love this piece so much! It is very well worded, and I am scared for the character LOL

21 days ago

Stuck in a screen

PROMPT: Unplugged: Op-Ed Competition

This is a really good piece for the Op Ed. Great job, and I hope your piece is well received!

21 days ago

Why I Can’t Write a Good Poem

FREE WRITING

This is really awesome. I am in love with it, so good job!

21 days ago

Different

FREE WRITING

This is a great way to vent, take out anger, and improve your writing at the same time! Good job.

21 days ago

recompense

FREE WRITING

Okay this is eerie. I started reading this and BOOM, thunder and lightning lit up the sky. Anyways, this is a really good piece. Good job!

21 days ago

Changes

FREE WRITING

I really like this, especially the cliff hanger! It’s so refreshing to read a longer piece in this site, so thank you for this! <3

21 days ago

Left Out

FREE WRITING

YOU DESERVE BETTER THAN THEM!

24 days ago

Sight, Sound, Smell, Taste, Touch

PROMPT: Refuge

This was an interesting prompt, and you nailed it right on the head. You created a bold statement, so good job!

24 days ago

Love note (Secret admirer)

FREE WRITING

Your rhyming scheme and stanzas are on pint, and it is consistent. Good job!

24 days ago

The monster That Killed My Brother

FREE WRITING

I think this is a really well written piece. Good job!

25 days ago

Radio

FREE WRITING

Good job! This is a really good poem!

25 days ago

The Party

FREE WRITING

Thank you for this piece.

26 days ago

The Gift

FREE WRITING

This is a solid piece. Good job.

26 days ago

Noctisolum

PROMPT: Joy to the World

This is really cool.

26 days ago

my meaning

PROMPT: Three Sources

Good piece. I feel like you could expand a little more as to why nature is one of your meanings.

26 days ago

Heartbeat

PROMPT: Tweets of Self-Respect

I love this prompt so much, and you did a stellar job executing it.

26 days ago

smoke: a poem

PROMPT: Smog. Smoke. Soot.

Way to draw me in! Good job!

26 days ago

An Audience of One

PROMPT: Unplugged: Op-Ed Competition

This is really good. Good luck with the contest!!!!!!!

26 days ago

Poison Flowing

PROMPT: Plastic Ekphrastic

I like this piece. It is well worded. Good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

27 days ago

Innocent

FREE WRITING

This is just awesome.

27 days ago

Animal Squad

FREE WRITING

You need to reformat this i think. It is a little bit difficult to read due to the choppy irregular formatting.

27 days ago

Hypercriticism

PROMPT: Dictionary Title

Although it is short, it is to the point, and well worded. Good job! I don't feel like there is anything lacking content wise, but do consider editing this. It is formatted funny, and I feel that it takes away from the piece. And yes, i do like it (:

27 days ago

Fighting depression

PROMPT: Open Prompt

This is an interesting piece. I quite enjoyed it. I think that it would be a more solid and sturdy piece if you used less commas. The commas make it seem like you don't know what to say and that you are pulling this out of thin air.

27 days ago

1 of 100,000: The Adoption Crisis

PROMPT: Op-Ed Competition 2019

I like it.

3 months ago

Everyone Gets a Bite!

PROMPT: Food Writing Competition 2018

I hope this review is well received! Good luck in the contest!

about 1 year ago