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aharry01

United States

My name is Ava and I love writing, reading, and learning :)

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aharry01 (United States) reviewed:

Never Let You Go

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition 2019

Watch your balance of names and pronouns. You use "he" and "she" a bit too often, and you should try and figure out good places to use names as opposed to pronouns (especially when Mara appears--two female characters). Otherwise, beyond...

3 months ago

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aharry01 (United States) published:

The Lie

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition 2019

    “Alette, do you know who broke one of the glass cups and put it in the trash disposal?”
    Allete’s teacher stood over the trash can, dangling a large shard of glass between her thumb and index finger. Alette was clumsy enough to be a reasonable candidate, but it wasn’t her this time.
    “Nope. Ask Diane,” she shrugged, head looking down towards the scene she was drawing on the table. She was debating which color palette to use as her teacher turned...

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4 months ago

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aharry01 (United States) published:

Dinosaur Fight Club

PROMPT: Personal Narrative Competition 2018

    “Ava, do you wanna be the T-Rex or the Pterodactyl?” It stands as the most difficult question I’ve been asked all day. I scrunch my eyebrows and stare intently at the grass that encircles our square-shaped school building, as though the right answer waits weaved between the blades. Today marks an important Dinosaur Battle, because I need to reclaim my victory from last Tuesday (I had tripped over my sandals and given up an easy win to Mark). The sun...

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about 1 year ago

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aharry01 (United States) published:

Five Adventures

PROMPT: Five Beginnings

1. The first time I saw a Playboy ad was in fifth grade; it was next to the get well soon cards in Walmart. 

2. My dad says it's easier to ask for forgiveness than permission, but apparently that doesn't mean it's easy to ask for forgiveness. 

3. The summer I turn twelve, Brianna gets a new swimming pool in her backyard.

4. School: where the white cinderblocks sweat in the summer heat and so do all the boys.

5....

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over 1 year ago

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aharry01 (United States) published:

Froot Loop

PROMPT: All Talk

You know....you know what's weird?
The fact that you're reading on the floor of your boyfriend's bedroom instead of sitting with him?
No. Well yeah, but no. What I was gonna say was like, in books right? 
Books, yeah.
Like, why does the character always die in the end or the beginning? Just think about it. A major character never dies right smack in the middle of the book. It's absurd, really. 
What about....what about the one where the kid...

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almost 3 years ago

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aharry01 (United States) published:

Froot Loop

PROMPT: All Talk

You know....you know what's weird?
The fact that you're reading on the floor of your boyfriend's bedroom instead of sitting with him?
No. Well yeah, but no. What I was gonna say was like, in books right? 
Books, yeah.
Like, why does the character always die in the end or the beginning? Just think about it. A major character never dies right smack in the middle of the book. It's absurd, really. 
What about....what about the one where the kid...

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almost 3 years ago

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over 3 years ago

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aharry01 (United States) published:

Froot Loop

PROMPT: All Talk

You know....you know what's weird?
The fact that you're reading on the floor of your boyfriend's bedroom instead of sitting with him?
No. Well yeah, but no. What I was gonna say was like, in books right? 
Books, yeah.
Like, why does the character always die in the end or the beginning? Just think about it. A major character never dies right smack in the middle of the book. It's absurd, really. 
What about....what about the one where someone like...

over 3 years ago

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aharry01 (United States) published:

Froot Loop

PROMPT: All Talk

You know....you know what's weird?
The fact that you're reading on the floor of your boyfriend's bedroom instead of sitting with him?
No. Well yeah, but no. What I was gonna say was like, in books right? 
Books, yeah.
Like, why does the character always die in the end or the beginning? Just think about it. A major character never dies right smack in the middle of the book. It's absurd, really. 
What about....what about the one where someone like...

over 3 years ago