Anna Lang

United States of America

Boston, MA
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Anna Lang (United States of America)() published:

The Lake

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2017

She totters around the old house by the lake, collecting tools and other objects that did not fit in the brittle arms of an old woman. She stumbles outside where a half finished boat lays in the sand, the finished side floating on the lake. Her heart stutters as she hammers, but she does not stop until she remembers: her husband, barebacked, thwacking at the hull, glasses of cool lemonade and the skirt of her swishing dress. A flashing piece...

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over 2 years ago

Anna Lang (United States of America)() liked The Dreamcatcher by Andrew F (United States of America)()

over 2 years ago

Anna Lang (United States of America)() reviewed:

Water at Midnight

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2017

The only comment I have is that in my opinion, the second paragraph can be more vague instead of revealing what the student is worried about. This way the story can build more tension and suspense, as well as adhere...

over 2 years ago

Anna Lang (United States of America)() liked I love him too by facesosunny (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)()

over 2 years ago

Anna Lang (United States of America)() reviewed:

Fútbol

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2017

over 2 years ago

Anna Lang (United States of America)() earned a badge Popular Penman

over 2 years ago

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Anna Lang (United States of America)() published:

The Lake

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2017

She totters around the old house by the lake, collecting tools and other objects that did not fit in the brittle arms of an old woman. She stumbles outside where a half finished boat lays in the sand, the finished side floating on the lake. Her worn heart hazily stutters, but she does not stop until she remembers again: her husband, barebacked, thwacking at the hull, glasses of cool lemonade and the skirt of her swishing dress. A flashing piece...

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over 2 years ago

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Anna Lang (United States of America)() published:

X(mas)

PROMPT: 10 Words

i. frost
ii. fresh
iii. warmth
iv. wither
iv. vibrance
v. vivacity
vi. snap
vii. shimmer
viii. quiver
ix. quiet
x. together

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about 3 years ago

Anna Lang (United States of America)() published:

Outside is Where My Inside Is

PROMPT: The Peace of Wild Things

Nothing is quiet
Outside
but I can hear 
clearer than
ever before

Not to the 
chattering couple
on the subway stop
or to the
drooping lecturer
in the shuttered room

But to the 
inside,
the Inside
of me.

Nothing is quiet
Outside
but I can hear 
clearer than 
ever before

Here 
in silvery green fringe
of a willow tree
or beside
the dribbling footsteps
of a brooke

Outside
is where
my
Inside is. 




 

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about 3 years ago