I'm just left feeling so lonely because of that last line.
But all in all a great piece.
I kind of reminds me of how our peers want to shape us to be who they want us to be.

Besides the capitals, This piece is amazing. I'm not much for the lovey-dovey stuff but this is an exception.
Great work and Keep writing!!!
Look forward to seeing you around.

Amazing piece and story. I love it. I'm glad you came to WtW. Hoping to find more of your writing here.

I love it! Now, I don't say that often about pieces about love because I'm not a fan but because this is true.
Keep writing! Looking forward to more!

Amazing twist in the end.
I look forward to reading more work from you.
Keep writing!!!

An amazing piece about love and self-loathing. I love it.
Keep writing!!

An amazing way to describe love. That's a lot coming from me since I'm not usually a big fan of love.
But it was one of the best pieces I've read about love so far.