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Waves

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    The tide grasped toward the ends of beach towels along the shore and pulled back with a desperate resistance. Waves crashed through sandcastles, making the tiny empires sting with salt as they waited for unattainable relief. The water crashed and foamed while reflecting the tiring gaze of the setting sun. Couples, barefoot and relaxed, walked through the angry overturns of the sea, where waves crashed up against their ankles and sand angrily tried to pull loose from beneath their feet....

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Fireworks

PROMPT: Smog. Smoke. Soot.

    Every Fourth of July I would lie at the bottom of my kayak to watch the fireworks.  Explosions consumed the sky, illuminated it with sparks and colors followed by deafening booms that made it nearly impossible to think of anything else. The myriad of colors entranced all its viewers; the whole town was seemingly hypnotized like luring Sirens had decided to move into the skies. But once the finale was over and fireworks no longer flashed, clouds of smoke remained...

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Wildfires

PROMPT: Smog. Smoke. Soot.

A few things could use improvement are the dialogue tags. In the line, "' That's the power of wildfires" . Is all daddy says," the line would run a lot smoother if the period was replaced with a comma and...

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Dusk :) (United States of America) published:

Fireworks

PROMPT: Smog. Smoke. Soot.

    Every Fourth of July I would lie at the bottom of my kayak to watch the fireworks.  Explosions consumed the sky, illuminated it with sparks and colors followed by deafening booms that made it nearly impossible to think of anything else. The myriad of colors entranced all its viewers; the whole town was seemingly hypnotized like luring sirens had decided to move into the skies. But once the finale was over and the fireworks no longer, clouds of smoke remained...

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The City of Nothing

PROMPT: Invisible Cities

    It was a city no one ever thought of. A place where everybody passed through and gave no second thought. A place where travelers would stop to refill their gas tanks or grab a snack from the dingy little all purpose store that looked about twenty years abandoned. But yet, it was a city full of love by the people who inhabited it, and love the city gave back to the people. Sure, it may have not been outwardly...

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