Regan Strehl

United States of America

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PROMPT: Everyday Magic

What does the color red symbolize? Symbolism is used in a more subtle manner in successful works of literature to help express the theme. You use it seven times in the first paragraph. That only makes me more confused (why is everything in this world red)?, rather than help me understand your theme more. The same sentence is used to start the first two paragraphs. The two paragraphs following those mirror those first two, but with their own twists. Why are the first two exactly the same? Would it be better to make the second one different from the first?

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