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Bran Flakes

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Bran Flakes (United States) reviewed:

Overdue

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¨he¨ should be ¨the¨. I would use ¨woke¨ over ¨awoke¨.

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Bran Flakes (United States) reviewed:

Coffee Addiction

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I think the 2 should be two. I think the line ¨heart problems to those that are weak¨ is a little too brash and could use better wordplay.

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Bran Flakes (United States) published:

Better to Judge than to Fail

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Though I sit in my hole, and judge others with past merit.
My stories aren't much better, I would rather judge than to dare it.
 

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