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efflorescence

United States

15 | INFJ | ♀️

[ summer + spring 2019 ] peer ambassador
[ wattpad: ] infiorescent
[ author of: ] what the morning brings, girls of a feather, of silver and swans

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I appreciate any and all feedback on my writing (as long as it's constructive)! I post my experimental stuff here, but if you want to read my novels please check out my Wattpad profile :>

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efflorescence (United States) reviewed:

Melanie Martinez's "K-12"

PROMPT: Album Review Competition 2019

Overall, I think your review was successful in explaining the meaning behind the album and why other Write the World users might find it relatable. There were a few places where I think your grammar and syntax could be tightened...

1 day ago

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efflorescence (United States) reviewed:

The Moon and its Sky

PROMPT: Lunar Phrases

Overall, I really enjoyed reading your piece! I admire how you were able to take the original prompt and create something new and unique. You used a lot of beautiful imagery in this piece that contributed to its magical, ethereal...

2 days ago

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efflorescence (United States) reviewed:

Hong Kong

PROMPT: Rain or Shine

I really like what you say in the second paragraph, but I have a suggestion for how to expand on it and make it even more impactful! In writing, there's a technique called the rule of three. Basically, this rule...

6 days ago

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efflorescence (United States) published:

silver, stutter, stars

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i. silver tears drip from frozen lids, shimmering rivers down gold-blushed cheeks. flowers sprout from sterling pools, buds unfurled like open hearts. when their eyes flutter shut, heartbeats still, they smile, life blooming forth from their immortal sadness. 

ii. words do not spill from my lips like silken honey, a velvety ribbon of spoken thoughts. they stutter from my tongue like skipping stones, worn smooth from the worry that guards my heart like a sleeping serpent. roses choke my lungs,...

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7 days ago

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efflorescence (United States) published:

medusa

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roses spatter stones like bloodstains blooming from thorn-prickled feet. she stumbles through a garden of frozen forms, statues with lifeless eyes and onyx hearts. but she bursts with life, flowers spilling forth from peach-blushed lips and butterfly lashes. so much life it's blinding, like staring at the sun until sunset blossoms across your vision. her hand holds her side, her fingers stained crimson, red like roses, red like sunny strawberries and bitter cherries. she bursts with life, so much that...

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7 days ago

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efflorescence (United States) liked Hong Kong by BeTheChange18 (Japan)

7 days ago

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efflorescence (United States) liked september is an ever-closer due date by rainandsonder (United States)

9 days ago

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efflorescence (United States) liked assimilation; a tragedy in six parts by Anha (Australia)

about 1 month ago

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efflorescence (United States) reviewed:

the crime

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

Overall, I loved your piece, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. There were a few instances where I made some minor suggestions to tighten it up, but I think your story was amazing regardless. Good luck in the contest <3

about 2 months ago