@pril

Aruba

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caviar

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the bubbles that float up to your cup of water when you didn't even exhale. a mother gripping her son's hand as it slips away as silent as a black and white movie. one telephone leaving seven voicemails at once because you just got home. your cat screaming at the toddler who pulled her tail. losing the nerve to complete the homework a certain sister hid it in her comic book over the weekend. a movie critic reviews Rushmore with closed eyes and...

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@pril (Aruba) liked some quantities by vwords (Azerbaijan)

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@pril (Aruba) published:

sets (17)

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ding: step
Over the shoulder,
cover the chin-
jab, aim, hit.
Follow your foot,
lift and load,
turn and lock-
elbow doesn't drop.
Head down, eyes up.
Twist, twist. Shift, shift.
Swift hips power punch.
Left. Right. Inside. Outside.
Slide past offender.
Fist past your ear.
Move your head away-
DONT LOOK AWAY.
Nearer and nearer.
Jab. Right. Hook.
Bring it back,
before you begin-
again, reach out,
don't lean, make way.

ding: jab
Catch and punch.
Bring it lower;
left...
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@pril (Aruba) published:

roll d20(four)

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all around the table
seated with many nerds
we make up a fable
of dungeon masters words

this may seem so absurd
hero's, spells, orks, a quest
drop dice to be conferred
wish this committee best

watch it's twenty sides roll
snacks anxiously devoured
hoping to reach our goal
no yet  sign of coward

i'd stay put and not flee
help others while they heal
no matter our HP
team loyalty is real

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@pril (Aruba) published:

testing (the 23rd)

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packed computer lab
typing assigned number codes
pause, for approval

stuck in classroom talks
thoughts bring back the tests and notes
old unrecalled facts

blue wheeled plastic chairs
fidgeting trough equations
lead on scratch paper

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@pril (Aruba) published:

28newport

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perfect sun 
pretty faces
day of fun
urban places

marine feast
split crab cakes
chowder of east
grilled salmon flakes

wooden floor
rhythm deck
banded four
harmonious fleck

soft coast
serene tides
sea host
wave rides

recured road
fleeting places
unwritten odes
ephemeral faces

 

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