gabriellew
Australia
hi! i'm gaby
sixteen, she/her, bi!
Message from Writer
Hello everyone! I'd just like to say that I really appreciate feedback and suggestions on my work.
Peer Reviews
How do snowflakes fall?
FREE WRITING
I love the way each stanza produces a different story and image. It makes the read so much more interesting and vivid.
10 months
Alone.
FREE WRITING
It would be great to see you playing around with language a bit more, like adding more metaphors or personification to your writing, because I feel like they could work really well into this piece.
over 1 year
Not the Same
PROMPT: Water Body
This poem is crafted beautifully! Please keep writing :)
over 1 year
From the Ash I Rise
PROMPT: Rise
The way you've used personification is beautiful, and the rhyme really brings it all together. Keep writing!
over 1 year
The tase of simplicity
PROMPT: Improbable Flavor
I love how you've managed to turn ordinary things into things to be appreciated and savoured.
almost 2 years
old letters
FREE WRITING
I love your writing style, and the way it allows for readers to experience the moment for themselves. Please keep writing more!
over 2 years