gabriellew

Australia

hi! i'm gaby
sixteen, she/her, bi!

Message from Writer

Hello everyone! I'd just like to say that I really appreciate feedback and suggestions on my work.

Peer Reviews

How do snowflakes fall?

FREE WRITING

I love the way each stanza produces a different story and image. It makes the read so much more interesting and vivid.

10 months

Waves

FREE WRITING

I'm excited to see more of your writing :)

about 1 year

Alone.

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It would be great to see you playing around with language a bit more, like adding more metaphors or personification to your writing, because I feel like they could work really well into this piece.

over 1 year

Not the Same

PROMPT: Water Body

This poem is crafted beautifully! Please keep writing :)

over 1 year

From the Ash I Rise

PROMPT: Rise

The way you've used personification is beautiful, and the rhyme really brings it all together. Keep writing!

over 1 year

The tase of simplicity

PROMPT: Improbable Flavor

I love how you've managed to turn ordinary things into things to be appreciated and savoured.

almost 2 years

old letters

FREE WRITING

I love your writing style, and the way it allows for readers to experience the moment for themselves. Please keep writing more!

over 2 years