8b590112 502b 4c5d a598 c50972b04757

Super0smitty

United States

I am just trying and would love feedback I am not that great so just give me some time to improve.
Thanks,
Super0Smitty

8b590112 502b 4c5d a598 c50972b04757

Super0smitty (United States) liked a line by ajamwal ꒰•̹͡ິु•ິू꒱ (United States)

2 months ago

8b590112 502b 4c5d a598 c50972b04757
Good neighbor

Super0smitty (United States) earned a badge Good Neighbor

2 months ago

8b590112 502b 4c5d a598 c50972b04757
1

Super0smitty (United States) published:

Loss of Control

FREE WRITING

Hi!
You want to look like me?
Drink this tea!
Take these pills!
Do this exercise!
Go on this diet!
I guarantee you will lose ten pounds in the first week!
Sounds fantastic, right!? 
It’s almost too good to be true!
So come check this out!
You won’t regret it!
You have nothing to lose!
Other than the weight of course!
Take my advice!
You clearly need it!
I hate myself
I hate myself
I hate myself
I can’t be...
Seeking Peer Reviews

2 months ago

8b590112 502b 4c5d a598 c50972b04757
3

Super0smitty (United States) published:

What it feels like to breakdown

FREE WRITING

Having a breakdown is like running a marathon, your whole body hurts, and you can’t breathe. All you want to do is stop, give in, take a break, but you can’t, you can’t simply turn off a breakdown you need to see it through till the end. It is scary, because your whole body is begging for air, but it won’t take any in, your mind fills with dread, and your body feels like it’s filled with stones. You can’t...

Seeking Peer Reviews

10 months ago

8b590112 502b 4c5d a598 c50972b04757
2

Super0smitty (United States) published:

Hugs from my best bud

FREE WRITING

As I cry down the hallway, I see him, the tall beacon in the light, the one person I didn’t want to see me like this; crying, upset in the midst of a breakdown. He looks at me and asks if I was ok, holding my tears back as best as possible I nod hoping he thinks I am fine. We walk down the hall, a tear escapes my eyes and he definitely notices.
“You need a hug,” he tells...

Seeking Peer Reviews

10 months ago

8b590112 502b 4c5d a598 c50972b04757
2
1

Super0smitty (United States) published:

Alone

FREE WRITING

She sits alone. She sits all by herself. Awkward and alone. She looks at her phone texting people in hopes that someone responds to save her from her loneliness. She sits with her head down and avoiding eye contact. She doesn't know what to do, she is clearly uncomefortable watching the others talk. But only for a second, until she returns back into her little corner waiting for a break from her silence. She never breaks her silence she sits...

Seeking Peer Reviews

over 1 year ago

8b590112 502b 4c5d a598 c50972b04757

Super0smitty (United States) liked I Can’t Stand Your Taste by emily9053 (United States)

over 1 year ago

8b590112 502b 4c5d a598 c50972b04757
3

Super0smitty (United States) published:

The Best Advice I Have Ever Received

FREE WRITING

I have recently received some of the best advice ever. It might not make sense but I love it. Never follow your passion but go into  opportunities with passion. You can always be passionate about something but don't only do that thing. If you plan for your future and only do the thing you are passionate about then you might miss many opportunities that might strike a new passion inside of you. People always say to follow your dreams but...

over 1 year ago

8b590112 502b 4c5d a598 c50972b04757

Super0smitty (United States) liked The Taste of Love by sarahchenerio3 (United States)

over 1 year ago

8b590112 502b 4c5d a598 c50972b04757
2

Super0smitty (United States) published:

Look at the mess you created

FREE WRITING

Why are you like this?

Why do you send suggestive texts to someother girl when we both know you are my best friends boyfriend?

Not only that is the problem,

Why did she not find out this happened from you?

Why did she find out by thr girl you sent the texts to?

Why were we scared because someone said that they had something important to tell my friend and to tell her to meet her in the bathroom alone?
...

Seeking Peer Reviews

over 1 year ago