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lindsay270

United States

A writer trying to figure things out.

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I love writing, you love writing, let's be friends.

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lindsay270 (United States) reviewed:

Space and Us

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This is such a beautiful piece! I love the cosmic metaphors, it gave the entire piece an otherworldly feel. More importantly, it carried a wonderful message. Good luck with all your future writings!

4 days ago

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lindsay270 (United States) liked A Message to White America by Ayra (United States)

5 days ago

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lindsay270 (United States) liked Dear Asian-inspired musicals,... ?! by Tue (Vietnam)

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lindsay270 (United States) liked Space and Us by LittleWolf (Australia)

6 days ago

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lindsay270 (United States) reviewed:

Clothes of Mortality

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I am also very much in love with the rhythm of the poem. There is almost a lyrical songlike quality to the breaks in the lines of the poem. There is also something akin to a story in the story....

6 days ago

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lindsay270 (United States) published:

Measures of Self-Worth

PROMPT: Self-Respect

  1. Doing something that scares me because a comfort zone is just a mundane village and every reader of fairy tales knows that the forest is where the adventures begin.
  2. Making someone smile with a corny joke because I've been in the darkness before and no one can survive the darkness without help, and some laughter never hurts.
  3. Getting something done sooner than later because present me really needs to be picking up the slack in her relationship with future me.
  4. ...

6 days ago

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lindsay270 (United States) liked there is no destroying a goddess #bigcolor by loveletterstosappho (United States)

7 days ago

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lindsay270 (United States) reviewed:

falling apart

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Is there any reason that you chose to end the piece the way you did? I would suggest having a final paragraph to tie the whole piece together. I do like how you spent one paragraph on each family member...

9 days ago

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lindsay270 (United States) liked The Deep Hearts of our Teachers by Opal Drop (United States)

10 days ago

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lindsay270 (United States) reviewed:

Sparkler

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I like the usage of strong and intense verbs and adjectives in this piece; it really drew me in as a reader and allowed me to visualize the imagery more clearly. Even at the surface, this is clear that this...

11 days ago