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Do What Is The Best For You

PROMPT: Personal Essay Competition: Making Change

Always be sure to re-read your writing and double check grammar and spelling. This can sometimes feel secondary when drafting because developing ideas is very important, but for a final draft ensuring the piece is polished is important in creating...

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The Letter

PROMPT: Science Fiction Competition 2018

One other aspect I would suggest is paragraphing. Even though it is a short piece, splitting into segments to differentiate between the letter and narration as well as emphasize shifts in ideas and tones would help the reader stay focused....

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From The Inside Looking Out

PROMPT: Food Writing Competition 2018

Why have you chosen to guide the writing with "we"? While it does extend the message to the reader, it also poses a potential problem of incorrectly including the reader/audience in a claim. It is impossible to prove that everyone...

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Red Sauce

PROMPT: Food Writing Competition 2018

Diversifying your word choice and punctuation may be effective in elevating your work. The ideas are fantastic, and using more complex sentence structures provides the opportunity to really convey the intricacies of each phrase and idea. While it can be...

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The Heart of the Poet

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2018

When reading the poem, the two instances of second-person (stanzas 1 and 5) interrupt the poem's flow a little. You can develop a relationship with the audience without directly using "you." Unique metaphors, imagery, etc. may be more effective. However,...

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Human Heart

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2018

There are a few grammatical and punctuation errors that interrupt the flow of the poem. I have highlighted some words that seem to need apostrophes. I love the idea you introduce in the first couple stanzas. It is relatable, but...

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