This is really well-done. Thanks for entering! :)

Such a fun read! Thank you for entering! :)

Such a good job! Thank you for entering :)

I love this so much. It is very much a story of being knocked down, but it left me with hope in my heart and a half-smile on my face. Thank you

This is such a pretty descriptive piece. It's really well done, thank you

This is a really good piece. I like it a lot and feel like it's a very powerful piece of writing. Thank you for sharing

Overall, an excellent job. It's a really strong piece and I really appreciate your effort.