Remi
United States
Message from Writer
Some days, I take a look at the world and I take a look at myself, and I say 'What can I do to make the world a better place?'
Peer Reviews
Baseline.
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This piece hits close to home for me and I just want to thank you for writing it. I hope you go far with your writing, I know you could.
9 months
Picking Strawberries
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This was absolutely amazing, definitely made me cry a little. Continue writing, I can hardly imagine just how far you'll go.
9 months
World of Glass | #Howdy
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No hate of course, did you get this idea from that one book? I can't remember the name of it, but the main character was in the same predicament. I love how the entire piece remind me of it, but undoubtedly different. The whole thing was amazing really. Keep writing, you're gonna go far.
9 months
Colors to the Sightless
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I really liked how you described all the colors, many left me with a warm feeling
almost 3 years
When I Find You
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This may be short, but it was beautifully written. Continue to write, you are doing fantastic.
about 3 years
Dinner Time
PROMPT: WILD
Maybe go on a little bit more about the actual eating of the thing before revealing it's a lion. Maybe add in the hunt? I don't know, that's what I would do. Just to make the overall creepiness effect even more so. But that's just me
about 3 years
happy endings
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I really love this piece. You are an amazing writer and should continue to write. I wish you the best of luck.
about 3 years