disontinued

United States

disontinued (United States) published:

i love him but i still dont understand what "we" are supposed to be

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my love please look at me not as if i am i issue but as if i am something you enjoy to be around
when you hear my gasps you seem to enjoy me
but when my moans are silenced, you grow impatient and your face and emotions 

they are vague to what i expect the person who says he loves me to resemble

they are as fraudulent as the words that spew from your mouth like a faucet that will...

almost 2 years ago

disontinued (United States) published:

Poetry from a self conscious bottom

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have i gotten to the point to where im no longer pretty to you??
do i annoy you
do i somehow make you feel bad?even though i devote my every waking hour to your needs and what i want to help you with,
after making it clear that i only want you to be happy,
you're only able to say okay in the wake of my devotion to you even including the flaws that the gods decided to bestow upon you? ...

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almost 2 years ago

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disontinued (United States) published:

Possible short story

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a interracial relationship (puerto rican girl and black man) both work at a jazz house. They meet eachother behind a library and soon enter a relationship. They soon start working together with the lady as a bartender in a jazz club and the man playing the trombone in said jazz club. They encounter many different many oops while trying to run their business including gang rivalries, drama between eachother's family and a overall uncaring world.

about 2 years ago

disontinued (United States) liked Ginseng by _________ (United States)

about 2 years ago

disontinued (United States) liked Hidden Plains by Eliza_Bowen16 (United Kingdom)

about 2 years ago

disontinued (United States) published:

the artist

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i see her in polaroid pictures
a fleeting smile attached to a messy bun and the smell of cigarettes
the girl in the corner of a jazz house 
when the tables are being cleaned and the chairs put away
she is still there, writing away her worries and waiting for better days
She is the one i love
she is the one who loves me
however
she is not one to be tied down
She promises to marry me if...

about 2 years ago

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disontinued (United States) published:

sentence poems (electric bugaloo)

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you are a weeping willow in a garden that the universe has forgotten about

about 2 years ago

disontinued (United States) published:

plants

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my tears water the ground like the rain
breeding and festering small bulbs of my guilt and hate for myself and the world
My plants grow from my love, but my humans grow from my disgust
I feel nothing besides the numbing feeling of fertilizer when it covers my body or the hard head rushing feeling of a little girl picking me as her next victim. 
Plants are my only friends, and that can be written in the trees

about 2 years ago

disontinued (United States) reviewed:

I'm Fine

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I know how hard things can get, you always have a pen and paper to write everything out on. Goodluck and remember there is always someone who can help.

about 2 years ago

disontinued (United States) liked I'm Fine by Solstice Simonson (United States)

about 2 years ago