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renee.bbn

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beginning writer, any feedback is great!!

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any feedback is greatly appreciated, just trying to be a better writer!!

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renee.bbn (United States) published:

Journey of Love

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   The Earth is about to blow up and everyone is about to be left homeless. I have been preparing for weeks to escape this dreadful planet, and everyone’s anxiety is running high. What if it explodes a couple days before we estimated? We would all die.
    This fear, only thought to be a ‘what if’ question, had now turned all too real. The Earth has been around for about 10.5 billion years now, and there is still nothing wrong with...

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renee.bbn (United States) reviewed:

i was the moon

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I honestly cannot think of one thing to improve on. I’m not the best at writing poetry, so I probably couldn’t give you as good of advice as a professional poet, but I just wanted to review to tell you...

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renee.bbn (United States) published:

Elemental (Part 2)

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CHAPTER 2
 
     Daelynn settled down into a soft chair facing the principal’s desk. She didn’t know what to expect, or what she was going to have to do. All she knew was that she was scared out of her right mind for what was to come. Anything that had to do with the principal was usually bad, at least back in her home dimension.
     Eventually, after pacing around the room for a good ten minutes, looking frantic...
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