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Hi, Konnichiwa, Hola! I am an exchange student from Japan, Rio. I am learning English and Spanish now. Writing something in English is still very difficult for me, but it is fun! Please give me comments about my writing. Thank you:)

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Hello, I am an exchange student from Japan, Rio. I am seventeen. I signed it up because I want to improve my English writing skill, and some professional opinions about my writing. Writing something in English is still very difficult for me, but I believe this website and your lectures will help me a lot. Thank you!

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That Day 3.11

PROMPT: Environmental Writing Competition 2018

When I was ten years old, that happened. 
In 2011 March 11th, around two o’clock, the school finished earlier because the spring break was just around the corner. After I got home from school, no one was at home. I was going to watch my favorite anime so I was sitting on the couch and turned on the TV. Looking to outside, there were some tiny birds that were enjoying basking in the sun. I still remember it was a...

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